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Hi, It’s for the school, can you help me please? The topic is: Tony's mother died when Tony was still a young kid. He was told she had a car accident. He is now 20 and his grandmother had decided to tell him the truth about his mother's death: Dino had his wife murdered. I must do a dialogue between Tony and the grandmother: Alicia. Can you help me for correct my dialogue and add ideas, please! Thank you very much =) My dialogue is: "My little son, since time of year, it has bothered my mind but I want to tell you about it today." From a sadness coming from the depths of her heart, she cried, screamed, while grief. "Oh!! It's awful! You are now 20 years old and I want you to know the truth but ... but ... this ... this is not ... not easy to say." Tony moved by the speech of his grandmother, he asked in a soft voice: "Why you do not go well? Tell me! You seem to have your minds elsewhere, is not it? I do not like see you like this granny". Crying, she revealed a low voice: “Well, your mother did not die in a car accident”. “Really? Are you sure?” He said in a tone of nervous. But he still had some hope. “Is this a kidnapping? Or something else? Will I ever see her again? Or is she really dead?” He wondered. He became weak and he pale. Ashamed, she quickly announced the reality. “It’s your father killed her”. “What? This is not true? I can not believe you, it's impossible!” Tony replied, shocked and not knowing what to do. Annoyed, he wanted more information. “Why have you kept this secret for so long? Why tell me now?” His voice changed in pitch. It became unfit to continue his words and hung his head, annoyed that her grandmother had taught him. She explained in a hoarse voice that showed his lack of such an action which itself had struggled to recover. Spoke of it again, it was painful. “So I tell you: It was a night when the snow fell peacefully in the streets, your father came home. However, your mother was waiting, she had talked to him. Indeed, she had just learned that her husband was not earning money honestly”. “What was he doing then?” Astonished, he expected the worst. “Was not a nice job? But I have memories of when he came home from work, he called you to ask you about it, is not it? However, it were we listening all the time, you do not agree?” Embarrassed, she thought: “Uh ... If ... If I agree with you but infect it was a mafia gangster. That is to say that it was illegal actions such as theft, illegal gambling, and drug trafficking...” Tony surprised and not expecting it, continues his speech to learn more about his mother. “Ah, I see, and that he had ask her want she said?” Alicia spoke in a low voice that was like she was going back tears. “She asked him to stop or it will go wrong. He was afraid that she will report to the police. Indeed, it was too dangerous for him and for the group Mafia”. “As a result, he killed her, is not it?” asking, knowing the answer. The weakness came, but she continued talking quietly. “Yes, it's pretty much it. After the speech he met the previous evening with your mother, he spoke to his group and anger, he asked his men to kill your mother before she could do anything to stop them overnight”. The feeling of revenge arrived faster than expected and he exclaimed in a terrible aggression. “Oh! What a despicable man! And you have not mention it before and you let me live with a lie! I lived with murder and nobody tells me anything! He could killed me and you would not even respond!” “Eh! Calm down ... It looks like you're biting like a dog defending its territory. For my part, I do not regret what I did; I was not ready to tell you. My heart was closed because of this accident. I hid for all these years, and now my only solution is to tell you”, explained to you the news I kept in my heart. He called on all sides: “calm down! No, but it does not go head! My mother was my life, I could not even enjoy her, and then, that it was she who gave birth. And you think it's normal? You described the murder as an accident! But you are not ashamed of what you say! This is my mother, I love her and you talk as if she were an object. You hurt me a lot”. She began to cry and she begged her little grand son: “I ... I'm ... sorry, do not want me! I beg you. You know, it was not easy for me too and now, to tell you, it's even more difficult. Forgive me if I'm wrong. I'm for anything; I only suffer, as you do. I'm so sorry!” It is quiet and grinds his teeth, he said: “Leave me alone! I need to rest, reflect, on the right solution?” “No, you’re old enough now to understand what happened. So you must act without losing a minute.” she explained to him the problem with nervousness. Tony took his courage in and quoted shares. “My behavior with my father is going to change, there is no question that I should obey him. My desire is to kill him, but have I the courage to do it?” Alicia surprised by his behavior replied: “If it makes you feel better. I do want to get involved in your family bussiness. I do not havea problem with it!” “Grandma in any case, there is no question that I trust him; I will leave this house and live freely without reproducing this bad example. I need you to know that grandma is not going to pay for what she did. I thought again and again about talking to you, I am sincere. Having no more trouble; I want you to be happy. I'll get my turn and you withdraw from this story. It will be forgiveness for me. It is unclear what he felt but he will soon understand.” THANK YOU VERY MUCH :) You can add ideas, change the text… =)