At the campsite

Would you like to go on a camping trip? Why, why not?


ClemensW

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Yes I would like to go to a camping trip. For a few days it is okay. But I prefer on holidays to sleep in a hotel.

Mon, 07/19/2010 - 22:54
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Your work is so good I hate to make this one correction, but here goes.

One rule in English is to never begin a sentence with the word "But".  Actually the same goes for the word "And".

Otherwise,

Sehr, sehr gut gemacht!

Danke.

 19/07/2010 21:54
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