I'm interested in marine life because I like surfing or walking in beach.
If you want to see about a fact of the sea, try to find trees that exposed to water. You will see weird organisms behind the tree.
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Sat, 01/23/2010 - 17:42
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It's good! |
| 23/01/2010 16:42 |
Sat, 01/23/2010 - 17:43
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I'm interested in marine life because I |
| 23/01/2010 16:43 |
Sat, 01/23/2010 - 17:44
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I'm interested in marine life because I like surfing or walking on the beach. If you want to know |
| 23/01/2010 16:44 |
Sat, 01/23/2010 - 17:44
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Nice done, here's how you can improve: I'm interested in marine life because I like surfing and walking on the "If you want to see about a fact of the sea, try to find trees that You will see weird organisms behind the tree. The second sentence is grammatically correct. I know what you mean, but you don't say it like this. Possible other sentence: If you would like to know an interesting fact about the see, try to find trees that are exposed to water. You'll see weird organisms behind there. Nice job, though! |
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Thu, 11/24/2011 - 15:36
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Amazing |
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Sat, 04/21/2012 - 13:10
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very good! |
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Are you interested in marine life? Why? Why not? Do you know any interesting facts about the sea?