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No ,I'm not vegetarian , but I already had a vegan diet ,and I try to eat more fish than meat because I know it's better for the health .And a lot of doctors and dietitians suggest to eat more fish than meat .I'm not really sure ,but may be because of the cancer of the colon .
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No ,I'm not vegetarian , but I already had a vegan diet ,and I try to eat more fish than meat because I know it's better for the health .And a lot of doctors and dietitians suggest to eat more fish than meat .I'm not really sure ,but may be because of the cancer of the colon . Good, a couple of minor corrections: No,I'm not a vegetarian, but I already eat a vegan diet and I try to eat more fish than meat because I know it's better for my health. A lot of doctors and dietitians suggest eating more fish than meat. I'm not really sure why, maybe because of colon cancer. (You are not supposed to start a sentence with "and", though people do it) Nice job!
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No ,I'm not vegetarian , but I have eaten a vegan diet ,and I try to eat more fish than meat because I know it's better for the("my" is a better word choice) health. Jean Claude, excellent job! I made some corrections to improve your grammar and make your writing more native. Just for your information, in formal writing situations, such as at work, you shouldn't use contractions. :)) |
| 22/02/2012 01:11 |
Are you a vegetarian? Why? Why not?