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mickhael

mickhael (32)

mickhael
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I improve my English on busuu.com, I go to the cinema to see American movies. I usually write my penfriends who live abroad. It 's very important to me to communicate. Sometimes, I call them and talk on the phone.

Sun, 09/20/2009 - 15:27
Colelle

Colelle

Colelle
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I improve my English on busuu.com, I go to the cinema to see American movies. I usually write to my penfriends who live abroad. It 's very important to me to communicate. Sometimes, I call them and talk on the phone.

 

Excellent

 20/09/2009 14:27
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Sun, 09/20/2009 - 21:36
CarolineJane

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CarolineJane
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I improve my English on busuu.com, I go to the cinema to see American films and I often write to my penfriends who live abroad. Keeping in touch is very important to me. Sometimes I call them and for a chat.

 20/09/2009 20:36
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Mon, 09/21/2009 - 09:28
Nicoll

Nicoll (37)

Nicoll
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I improve my English on busuu.com, I go to the cinema to see American movies. I usually often write to my penfriends who live abroad, sometimes I call them and talk on the phone. It 's very important to me to be able to communicate.

This really is very good, but I have changed the word order as you were still talking about your friends, after stating that you like to be able to communicate.  By making this change the topic remains consistant.  However, as always your statement is clear and easy to understand and your level of English is excellent!!  Really !!

 

 21/09/2009 08:28
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