At the hairdresser's

A " brunette "  is a person who has dark hair.  A "blonde "  is a person who has fair hair.  A " redhead "  is a person who has, ginger, copper-coloured or red hair.

I don't need to go to the hairdresser's very often as I have naturally healthy, beautiful hair. Like my Mother's, my hair is dark-brown so I don't need to have my roots touched- up every six weeks like so many of my friends who dye their hair. I think that using dye all the time can make hair very unhealthy. I like the colour of my hair so when I do go to the hairdresser's, I usually just have it trimmed and layered. I would never  go  to a hairdresser that I didn't know. Although I don't often have a haircut, I would never let my hair grow so long that it would look like " Rapunzel's!"  I like it looking neat and tidy.

" roots touched-up" =  to have the roots re-dyed.

" I like my hair's colour therefore... "  =  I like the colour of my hair so... "

{ Sorry Heidisface, but your last sentence just doesn't make sense. }

When  using " i "  to refer to yourslf in the first person, it MUST be a capital   " I ".      NEVER,  "  i "        e.g.

 "  even though i do not go to a hairdresser's often, i never....."

 "  even though I do not go to a hairdresser's often, I never ..."

I do not go to the hairdresser's often because I naturally have very healthy and beautiful hair. and I think that I am a brunette: my hair is naturally dark brown as my mother's thus I do not need to go to the hairdresser's every six weeks when the dark roots start to show. but Most of my friends go to the hairdresser's to have their hair dyed. In my opinion, It is not healthy to always dyed your hair. all along I know that this can bring forth result in unhealthy hair. I mean, I like my natural hair's colour therefore I have only my haircut with a little trim and some layers put into it. and When I am in a different city I do not want to go a hairdresser without the knowledge of the hairdresser's skill . I prefer to make an appointment for a cut before I go to the hairdresser. By the way, even though I do not go to my hairdresser often, I never let my hair grow out like a Rapunzel's. hair Everythings needs to being neat and fresh always and when it is about starts to get messy I just let it go away get it cut again.

Good work! However, the longer sentences were confusing because you sometimes changed the topic mid-sentence. It's often better to write a shorter, straightforward sentence.

I hope the corrections were clear. :)