There are happy parents: a nice mum and a handsome dad. There are also a beautiful and kind and daughter and a little son. They are in a park.
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Fri, 06/19/2009 - 11:38
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There are happy parents: a nice mom a handsom dad. There is also a beautiful and kind daughter and a little son. They are in a park. Fantastic :) |
| 19/06/2009 10:38 |
Fri, 06/19/2009 - 11:39
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Hello, I think it should be reformulated to be more compact, like this maybe: There is a happy family in the park comprising: a nice mum, a handsome dad, a beautiful and kind daughter and a little son. You used also too many "and" but otherwise I think is good. Very well, keep on learning :)
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Sun, 07/19/2009 - 14:27
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Thanks a lot! Bye |
| 19/07/2009 13:27 |
Describe the family that appears in the photograph!