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When I go to the bank, it's really because I need something. My bank offers many services. I can (to) open a current account and a savings account. I can use a bank draft and a debit card. Every month, my bank sends (to) me a bank statement. With my debit card, I can withdraw money from the ATM. I can get a loan or a mortgage to  buy a house or an apartment. If I want to buy a car, I can get credit. I don't use (the) internet banking because I am afraid of computer pirates. In France there are banks all over the country.

When I go to the bank, it's really because I need it. My bank proposes many services. I can to open a current account and a savings account. I can use the bank draft and the debit card. All the month,my bank send to me the bank statement. With my debit card, I can withdraw in the ATM. I can realise a loan with a mortgage for buy a house or an apartment. If I want to buy a car, I can do a credit. I don't use the internet banking because I am afraid of pirates computing. In france there are banks in the all country.

When I go to the bank, it's really because I have to.  My bank offers many services.  I can open a checking account and a savings account.  I can use  checks or a debit card.  Every month my bank sends me a statement.  With my debit card I can withdraw money from an ATM.  I can get a mortgage loan to buy a house or an apartment.  If I want to buy a car, I can get a loan.  I don't use internet banking because I am afraid of computer pirates.  In France, there are banks throughout the country.

Very good!

When I go to the bank, it's really out of  necessity. My bank offers many services: for example, I can open a cheque or savings account, I can take advantage of a bank draft  or a debit card,  and at the end of each month my bank sends me  a bank statement. With my debit card, I can withdraw  at an ATM, and I also have the option to take a loan with a mortgage to buy a house or an apartment. If I want to buy a car, I can use credit. I  avoid internet banking because I am afraid of computer hackers.  In france there are banks  all over the all country.

As I always seem to get to you last, and both of those girls do a wonderful job with your corrections.....I just try to offer you a few more alternatives.

cheers love xx

When I go to the bank, it's really because I need to. My bank provides many services. I can to open a current account and a savings account. I can use a bank draft and a debit card.

Each month, my bank sends to me my bank statement. With my debit card, I can withdraw money from the ATM. I can obtain a loan as a mortgage for buying a house or an apartment. If I want to buy a car, I can get credit.

I don't use the internet for banking because I am afraid of computer pirates. In France there are banks throughout the country.

Well explained!