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Do you think people should be obliged to work 65 hours a week?


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I regard that people don't should be obliged sixty five hoursa week because could be have a bad inflance for their health and their mood. Assume, when people work 65 hours, i imagine that they heven't got free time for themselves. i 'm opposed to to work too long time and when people could work this time they have to disagree themselves managers and insinuate him that his hours of work are incompatible with illegal. I doubt that somebody can agree for this work.

I think that people should not be obliged to work sixty five hours a week because it could be have a bad influence on their health and their mood.I  assume, when people work 65 hours, i imagine that they heven't got  any free time for themselves. I 'm opposed to  work too many hours and when people have to work this time they shoud argue that the hours of work are incompatible and illegal. I doubt that somebody would  agree to do this work.

 

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I regard believe that people don't shouldn't be obliged to work sixty-five hours a week because it could be have a bad inflance for influence on their health and their mood. Assume,  When people work sixty-five hours a week, I imagine that they haven't got free time for themselves.  I'm opposed to to people having to work too long time many hours.  When people could work this time such long hours they have to should disagree themselves with their managers and insinuate point out to him that his hours of work are incompatible with illegal.  I doubt that somebody can anyone would agree for this to work such long hours.

That was a very good attempt at writing a long passage.  I have made a few suggestions below:

1.  Many English numbers are hyphenated.  Use sixty-five, not sixty five.

2.  Note that replacing 'because it could have a bad influence on their health and their mood' by 'because it could adversely affect their health and their mood' gives a neater sentence.

3.  You should always use an uppercase I and not a lowercase i.

     It should be I, not i and I'm not i'm.

If you do not understand any of the changes made then please feel free to ask.

With best wishes,

Les M

 

 

I believe that people should not  be obliged to work sixty five hours-a- week because  this could have a bad effect on  their health and their mood. I think that , when people work 65 hours, that they have free time for themselves.  I am opposed  to people working too long time and when people  work this long they have disagreements with  managers.  And bI believe that this many hours of work are intolerable, and illegal. I doubt that someone  can agree these many hours of work.

 

Ok, good effort, Alek!

I am of the opinion, that people  should not be obliged to work sixty-five hours-a-week, because it could have a bad influence on their health and mood. Assume, when people work 65 hours,  that they don't have free time for themselves. I am opposed to long work lschedules.  When people hve to work this much they have to disagree with their managers and insinuate tohim that this many  hours of work are incompatible with your schedule, and, illegal. I doubt that somebone can agree to this work schedule.

 

Good, Alek!

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I regard that people don't should be obliged sixty five hoursa week because could be have a bad inflance for their health and their mood. Assume, when people work 65 hours, i imagine that they heven't got free time for themselves. i 'm opposed to to work too long time and when people could work this time they have to disagree themselves managers and insinuate him that his hours of work are incompatible with illegal. I doubt that somebody can agree for this work.

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I believe  that people should not be obliged to work sixty five hours-a-week, because it could  have a bad effect on their health and their mood. Assume, that  people work 65 hours, I imagine that they haven't any free time for themselves. I 'm opposed to  working  too long.   And, when people  work this time they have to disagree with managers and insinuate to him that his hours of work are incompatible and illegal. I doubt that somebody can agree working such a long week.

 

Good .Aleksandra!