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The swimming event is my favorite one, I've always wanted to swim the way those competitors do it, I really enjoy watching them.
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Sun, 05/27/2012 - 01:09
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Perfect The swimming event is my favorite one, I've always wanted to swim the way those competitors do it, I really enjoy watching them. If you wanted to be more concise you could leave out the words "one" and "it" and it does not change the meaning. But, it's fine if you don't. Just a tip. Cheers! |
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Sun, 05/27/2012 - 13:50
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Which Olympic sport do you like the most? Why?