Basic Structure of a Business Email

Now it is your turn to write an informal email to your friend.


mireille keleshian

mireille keleshian

mireille keleshian
I speak:
English, Arabic, Armenian
I learn:
English, Spanish, Italian, Turkish
Busuu berries :
40817

To:Tom Green@mail.com
From:Mrs Grey@compani.com
Subject:Hair products line
Dear Mr Green
I am writing to confirm that we are very interested in your product.
Please send me a relevant catalogue with the full product line.We will review the different products in details before sending you an official order.
Kind regards.
Mireille Grey
Export Manager

tlhogard

tlhogard

tlhogard
I speak:
English
I learn:
Spanish, Urdu
Busuu berries :
350

To:Tom Green@mail.com
From:Mrs Grey@compani.com
Subject:Hair products line        <Subject: Hair Products Line>
Dear Mr Green                         <Dear Mr. Green,>
I am writing to confirm that we are very interested in your product.
Please send me a relevant catalogue with the full product line.We will review the different products in details <detail> before sending you an official order.
Kind regards. <Kind regards,>
Mireille Grey
Export Manager

 

mireille keleshian

mireille keleshian

mireille keleshian
I speak:
English, Arabic, Armenian
I learn:
English, Spanish, Italian, Turkish
Busuu berries :
40817

thank you

very good

nice

enéas mendes da silv

enéas mendes da silv (44)

enéas mendes da silv
I speak:
Portuguese
I learn:
English, Spanish
Busuu berries :
19274

Congratulations, very well.

PeacheyD

PeacheyD (39)

PeacheyD
I speak:
English, Italian
I learn:
French, Turkish, Slovak
Busuu berries :
35236

To:Tom Green@mail.com

From:Mrs Grey@compani.com

Subject:Hair products line

Dear Mr Green,

I am writing to confirm that we are very interested in your products.

Please send me a relevant catalogue with the full product line. We will review the different products in detail before sending you an official order.

Kind regards,

Mireille Grey

Export Manager

Good!  In detail describes how you will review the product, so you have an adverb. No plural form for that.

You needed products in your opening sentence, because your next sentence asks for the full range of products.

Awesome :)

To:Tom Green@mail.com From:Mrs Grey@compani.com Subject:Hair products line Dear Mr Green I am writing to confirm that we are very interested in your product. Please send me a relevant catalogue with the full product line.We will review the different products in details before sending you an official order. Kind regards. Mireille Grey Export Manager

Excellent., Mireille!