My worst holidays ever

I can invent something. I booked my holiday in a nice hotel but when I arrived there they told me that I didn't have any booking. I talked with the person in charge and he told me that I was right. The room was dirty and I decided to change hotel. I went around the city and all hotels were full. Finally after two hours I had a room and I was really tired. The day after I thought that I might go for a walk but looking out of the window it was raining. I wanted to talk with someone and thought to call my friend but I couldn't find my mobile phone. I might continue but it's better to stop the story hehhee

I can invent something. I booked my holiday in a nice hotel but when I arrived there they told me that I didn't have a booking. I spoke to the person in charge and he told me that I was right. The room was dirty and I decided to change hotel. I went around the city but all hotels were full. Finally after two hours I found a room and I was really tired. The next day  I thought that I might go for a walk but looking out of the window it was raining. I wanted to talk with someone and thought of calling my friend, but I couldn't find my mobile phone. I could continue but it's better to stop the story hehhee

Your English is very good I have only substituted a few phrases that would be better, or more usually used here. I hope you are well.

Your story was very well written, easy to understand and just a few minor mistakes.

Well done....:) 

I agree with Robon. Well done  Emi.

I can invent something. Really?

I booked my holiday in a nice hotel but when I arrived there they told me that I didn't have any booking. I talked with the person in charge and he told me that I was right. The room was dirty and I decided to change the hotel. I went around the city and all hotels were full. Finally after two hours I had a room and I was really tired. The day after I thought that I might go for a walk but looking out of the window it was raining. I wanted to talk with someone and thought to call my friend but I couldn't find my mobile phone. I might continue but it's better to stop the story hehhee

nice story!

Thanks for the busuberry. Have a nice day!