My worst holidays ever

Describe your worst holiday ever.


Czips

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Czips
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Holidays are holidays, they can't be bad. Ok, so let's say that I was bad located. It was far away from the beach and the weather was awful, it was raining all the time and I have lost my luggage. And oh.... I've got stomachache and.... I've broken my leg and arm :)

joerg.m

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joerg.m
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that really sounds like awful holidays!!!  :-)

good text!

Nicholas32

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Holidays are holidays, they can't be bad. Ok, so let's say that I was badly located because it was far away from the beach. The weather was awful because it rained constantly. I also lost my luggage. And oh.... I've got stomach ache and.... I've broken my arm and leg. :) I hope these corrections are helpful. You did a good job, but I have altered your sentence construction so that it reads better. Please also note that when listing (arm, leg, etc) it is better to list the items aphabetically. Well done! :)

Czips

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Czips
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Polish
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English, Spanish
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Thank you very much! I was really helpful :)