Cooking at home

Choose one of these dishes, how do you think the dish you chose is prepared?

Ow I'm hungry at this moment. I have some difficulties to watch those tasty dishes. But I'll try to control myself.
Well, I see the chicken frying with pieces of potatoes. I almost feel that crunchy crust on my teeth. Such dish is cooked in an oven I suppose. I think I can cook it tomorrow! I can! Probably... I will try in any case.

Wed, 07/11/2012 - 05:59

Ow I'm hungry at this moment. I have some difficulties to watch those tasty dishes. But I'll try to control myself. Well, I see the chicken frying with pieces of potatoes. I almost feel that crunchy crust on my teeth. Such dish is cooked in an oven I suppose. I think I can cook it tomorrow! I can! Probably... I will try in any case.

Mmm, I'm hungry right now. It is hard for me to see these tasty dishes, but I'll try to control myself. Well, I see a roasted chicken with chips. I can almost feel (taste) that crunchy crust on my teeth (lips, tongue?) I suppose that this dish is cooked in an oven. I think I can cook it tomorrow! I can! Probably...I will try in any case.

Very good essay. I have rewritten it to show more normal word order, and suggestion for word choices in some cases. I hope it helps you. If you would rather I correct your text, please let me know.

11/07/2012 04:59

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Wed, 07/11/2012 - 08:34

Thank you, Mr.Garman. You always help me and do it very well. It is important for me.

P.S. I can't cook anything today because my oven is broken :(

11/07/2012 07:34

Cooking at home

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