Study Abroad

I think that there are a lot of interesting advantages of to studying abroad.  Students can could learn many things which are different from in their own countries, therefore besides, they would be more prepared to face the world.  because If someone goes abroad they have  has to learn a new language inudents in order to communicate with other people. Also, students may might learn about other cultures, food, places and - the most important thing to for me - is to get to know people from around the world. Although life abroad is quite expensive in some countries, this is an experience most students would like to undergo no matter what.

This is a very good piece of work!!   Well done!!

I think that there are a lot of interesting advantages to studying abroad. Students can learn many things that are different from within their own countries and besides that, they would be more prepared to face the world because when someone goes abroad they need to learn new languages in order to communicate with other people.  Also, students will learn about other cultures, their food, different places and the most important thing for me is to get to  know people from around the world.  Although life abroad is quite expensive in some countries, this is an experience most students would like to undergo no matter what.

It would be better to say 'I think that there are many ......'  as the phrase 'a lot of' is colloquial (slang).

Try to stay within the same tense when using the plural form, and don't forget to use 's' when forming the plural.  Also in words ending with 'y' this changes to 'ies' in the plural.  (e.g country becomes countries).

Otherwise a good piece of writing.  Well done!

You're correct, it is already Wednesday.  My grand-daughter and I are having a quiet(ish) day at home, we've a pool and she is swimming and I'm watching (carefully) as she is only seven.  

This evening is the first event of the Olympics at Cardiif Millenium Stadium, it's the women's football team, not something I'm really interested in but I'll probably watch it on the television after Freya is in bed.  

Before I retired I lived near to Cardiff in a small village and used to watch Rugby with work colleaques from the local Police force.  My working career was quite varied, I started as a Junior in an estate agency, then about four years in the Dorset Constabulary, I then changed and worked for many years for a publishing company, and in my forties I moved to South Wales and rejoined the Police there.  Where I worked in various departments, sometimes on administration, sometimes in Forensics and Fingerprinting, sometimes I was seconded to work in the Drug  Squad.  My time in the police was interesting and varied and I enjoyed it.  There was never a dull moment!  Something was always happening.  

A few miles from where I live now is Weymouth where the Olympic sailing and yachting events will take place.  It is only a small town and the Olympics will cause chaos on the roads and trains so I probably won't visit until after the Olympics finish.  There is a really nice beach there where I take Freya, as a change from the ones very close to us.

Must go now as I think Freya has been out in the sun long enough (today is one of those rare ones in England) it is nearly 30 degrees and that doesn't happen often.  

Bye for now and I hope you enjoy 'Blur' I 've heard of them but can't say really it's my kind of music.