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Do you think people should be obliged to work 65 hours a week?


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In the world that we live now, have a job is necessary but not everybody can have one due to the crisis. And in our days, there are a lot of kinds of jobs. So, should everybody work 65 hours a week?
On one hand, if we want to stop the economic problems that our country have, we have to produce more money. So, if we work more we will have more money.
And on the other hand, as I had said, there are a lot of jobs and works, and not everyone has the same caracteristics. For example, a doctor has to work more hours than an actor, because is more necessary to be healthy than to be amused.
In my opinion, I think that is important to work but we have to work according the caracteristics of our job. And I think that there aren't a job where you have to work 65 hours per week (we should have to work the half of the day to Monday to Friday). Too much.

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Here the correction:

 In the world where  we live now, it  is necessary to have a job but not everybody  has one due to the crisis. And in our days, there are various kinds of jobs. So, should everybody work 65 hours a week?

On the one hand, if we want to solve the economic problems in our country, we have to produce more to get money. So, if we work more, we will have more money.

And on the other hand, as I said, there are a lot of jobs and works, and not everyone has the same responsibilities. For example, a doctor has to work more hours than an actor, because it is more necessary to be healthy than to be amused. 

In my opinion, I think that it is important to work but we have to work according to the criteria of our job. And I think that there isn't a job where you have to work 65 hours per week.  It is too much, (we would have to work the half of the day from Monday to Friday).

Dear Cristina, my English is good, but it isn't my native language. If you need help in German I'll do it.

If you want good pen pals for your corrections I'll give you some adresses.

By the way, thank you for your help. Evelyne