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hello.My dear !
my name is hiro. How are you everyting? Im looking foward to from you reply and lets have a tea together again !! I wish good luck and good condition . see you . |
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Hello Hiro. Well done. I remind you of the importance of capital letters in the English language. However, it is a fact that in informal electronic messges amongst friends, the capitals are being ignored these days. This is how I might write your message.
Hello My Dear. This is Hiro. How is everything? I am looking forward to a reply from you. Let's have tea together again. I wish you good luck and good health. See you soon.
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| 04/10/2012 04:46 | + 1 |
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Hello, my dear! My name is Hiro. How is your everything?Im looking foward to reply from you and lets have a tea together again !! I wish you good luck and good condition .see you . |
| 31/10/2012 23:35 | - 1 |
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Hello my dear! My name is Hiro. How are you? (or "how is everything?") I'm looking foward to your reply and let's have tea together again!! I wish you good luck and good health. See you soon. Well done Hiro! Not too bad, but remember to alsways start a new sentence in uppercase (capital letter) and all names of people, places, languages, books, movies, etc also start with uppercase. I hope this helps! ;) |
| 26/11/2012 02:27 | + 1 |
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ok you are polite thanks I want to english is more more improve
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| 26/11/2012 02:31 | + 1 |
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hello.My dear ! my name is hiro. How are you everyting? Im looking foward to from you reply and lets have a tea together again !! I wish good luck and good condition . see you . |
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Now it is your turn to write an informal email to your friend.