Basic Structure of a Business Email

Now it is your turn to write an informal email to your friend.


Kai-hiro

Kai-hiro (40)

Kai-hiro
I speak:
Japanese
I learn:
English
Busuu berries :
49291

hello.My dear !
my name is hiro. How are you everyting?
Im looking foward to from you reply and lets have a tea together again !!
I wish good luck and good condition .
see you .

jonmaz

jonmaz

jonmaz
I speak:
English
I learn:
French
Busuu berries :
27660

Hello Hiro.   Well done.

I remind you of the importance of capital letters in the English language.   However, it is a fact that in informal electronic messges amongst friends, the capitals are being ignored these days.

This is how I might write your message.

 

Hello My Dear.   This is Hiro.   How is everything?

I am looking forward to a reply from you.   Let's  have tea together again.

I wish you good luck and good health.

See you soon.

 

Alena.Khalva

Alena.Khalva (34)

Alena.Khalva
I speak:
Russian
I learn:
Japanese
Busuu berries :
122

Hello, my dear! My name is Hiro. How is your everything?Im looking foward to reply from you and lets have a tea together again !! I wish you good luck and good condition .see you .

TrentM

TrentM (41)

TrentM
I speak:
English
I learn:
Spanish, Portuguese
Busuu berries :
27393

Hello my dear! My name is Hiro. How are you? (or "how is everything?") I'm looking foward to your reply and let's have tea together again!! I wish you good luck and good health. See you soon.

Well done Hiro! Not too bad, but remember to alsways start a new sentence in uppercase (capital letter) and all names of people, places, languages, books, movies, etc also start with uppercase. I hope this helps! ;)

Kai-hiro

Kai-hiro (40)

Kai-hiro
I speak:
Japanese
I learn:
English
Busuu berries :
49291

ok you are polite thanks

I want to  english is more more improve

 

TrentM

TrentM (41)

TrentM
I speak:
English
I learn:
Spanish, Portuguese
Busuu berries :
27393

You are welcome Hiro! :)

zekizade subhan

zekizade subhan (15)

zekizade subhan
I speak:
Turkish
I learn:
English
Busuu berries :
662

hello.My dear ! my name is hiro. How are you everyting? Im looking foward to from you reply and lets have a tea together again !! I wish good luck and good condition . see you .