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Describe the last concert you went to.


Andrei187

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At the last concert, I was in Poland in a small but cozy town; the concert was dedicated to the City Day. Played group like Strzał W Głowę, Deer Scarlet, Remission Blame, SNOW. It was unforgetably cool.

At The last concert I went to was in Poland in a small but cozy town.  The concert was dedicated to the City Day. These groups played:  like Strzał W Głowę, Deer Scarlet, Remission Blame, SNOW. It was unforgetably cool.

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At  The last concert I went to was in Poland in a small, but cozy town; the concert was dedicated to the City Day. Groups such as Strzał W Głowę, Deer Scarlet, Remission Blame, and SNOW were playing. It was unforgetably cool.

I see that you are using the - semi-colon > ;   -  ,but cozy town; the concert was.... < correct :)

However, as the man above has corrected -   , but cozy town. The concert was  < much better because in the second half of your sentence where you are using the semi-colon - it's also another complete thought. 

It should be separated into another complete sentence.

You can choose to do it either way, both are correct. :)

Excellent Andrei! :))

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At The last concert, I went to was in Poland, in a small but cozy town. The concert was dedicated to the City Day. Among the groups that played group like were Strzał W Głowę, Deer Scarlet, Remission Blame, and SNOW. It was unforgetably cool.

 

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At the last concert, I was in Poland in a small but cozy town; the concert was dedicated to the City Day. Played group like Strzał W Głowę, Deer Scarlet, Remission Blame, SNOW. It was unforgetably cool.

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