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Describe two of the three photographs.

Oh My God, look at this guy, this guy's face is like a bug, he is Mr Bug :P, hey you Mrs bug, what are you doeeen?. I think, there is no much need to describe the first picture for me. In the second one, there's a piece of roast meat, and it seems very delicious to me, that I always like eating the dishes of red meat with some vegetables which are fried potatoes and green peppers with a few pieces of tomatoes, then having tea and a cigarette after the meal, makes me feel like I ate what a beautiful dish. Oh, I felt sorry for the little kid, just look at the dimple on the right side of her face, it is something like what the hell is that food she is eating, I think, parents shouldn't force their children's chance to eat the food untill finishing, if they really don't like, otherwise, the would be vomitting due to its bad taste, causing nausea.

Wed, 10/17/2012 - 02:24

Oh My God, look at this guy, this guy's face looks like a bug, he is Mr Bug :P, hey you Mrs bug, what are you doiiing?. I don't think that there is not much need to describe the first picture ~~for me.~~ In the second one, there's a piece of grilled meat, and it seems very delicious to me. I always like eating the dishes of red meat beef with some (certain kinds of) vegetables which are such as fried potatoes and green peppers with a few pieces of tomatoes, then having tea and a cigarette after the meal. This makes me feel like I ate what a beautiful dish. Oh, I felt sorry for the little kid in the third picture, just look at the dimple on the right side of her face, it makes you feel like, "What the hell is that food she is eating!" I don't think that parents shouldn't force their children's chance to finish all their food untill finishing, If they really don't like it, otherwise, it might cause nausea, and then they would be vomitting, all due to its bad taste, causing nausea.

ok, "certain kinds of" is in parantheses because the sentence is right whether you have it or not. It just depends on exactly what you were trying to say. Highlighted sections are either punctuation or a complete rephrase. For "of tomato", because you are eating pieces of one tomato, it is singular. Otherwise you wouldn't be eating pieces of one, you would be eating whole tomatoes or pieces off of several different whole ones, which, although I can see someone doing it ^^ , would not be good. mmm .. I think that explains everything, but if you have any questions, don't hestitate to ask :)

17/10/2012 01:24

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Wed, 10/17/2012 - 09:34

Oh, you are like a little and sweet bug as well, nibbling my sentences, stop doing that man, you are scaring me :(( LOL, I was actually shocked after I saw the shape of my writing) I am just joking. I really appreciated all what you have corrected and the advices you gave me :)))

Thank you so much!

17/10/2012 08:34

Wed, 10/17/2012 - 22:35

Hahaha you said you wanted it more visible :P

17/10/2012 21:35

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Wed, 10/17/2012 - 23:16

Yes I did, but now you made me be regretted that I said you :D, if one of my English teachers corrected my writings like this, I would probably decide to stop learning English, although I love English a lot )) I want you to not to play colours overmuch to make mistakes more visible, as I was like (@_q)-

17/10/2012 22:16

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Thu, 10/18/2012 - 01:03

yeah it was a little overkill hahaha but I only wanted to be REALLY visible :P I will do something in-between, and yes, that is exactly why I don't go overboard, because I don't want to discourage anyone.

18/10/2012 00:03

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Thu, 10/18/2012 - 11:10

You should use jet ski, then watch people how crazy you make them encourage to swim a long the beach :D hahaha =))

18/10/2012 10:10

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Wed, 10/17/2012 - 06:45

Oh My God, look at this guy, this guy's face is like a bug, he is Mr Bug :P Hey you Mrs Bug, what are you doin'?. I don't think, there is much need to describe the first picture.

In the second one, there's a piece of roast meat, and it seems very delicious to me. I always like eating dishes of red meat with some vegetables such as fried potatoes and green peppers with a few pieces of tomato, then having tea and a cigarette after the meal. It makes me feel that I have eaten a beautiful dish.

Oh, I feel sorry for the little kid. Just look at the dimple on the right side of her face, it is something like what the hell is that food she is eating. I think parents shouldn't force their children to finish their food if they really don't like it. Otherwise, they might vomit due to its bad taste, causing nausea.

Great!

17/10/2012 05:45

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Wed, 10/17/2012 - 09:37

Thank you very much, Stevie. This looks more innocent than the other correction above)

17/10/2012 08:37

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