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Do you think people should be obliged to work 65 hours a week?


amaku hikaru

amaku hikaru

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I am opposed to this opinion.
When people work too hard, work efficiency is reduced.
So, I suppose people have to take a rest moderately.
I consider people to be important to be enjoy life really.

alanheath1

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I am opposed to this opinion.

When people work too hard, their work efficiency is reduced.

So, I suppose people have to take a rest from time to time (moderately).

I consider people to be important and they should be able to really enjoy life.

amaku hikaru

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Thanks for correction.

amaku hikaru

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Thanks for correction.

jay17

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elsengoku san i have read alanheath1's correction it is the as i would have put,  very well done

amaku hikaru

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LordOfTheFail

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 I am opposed to this opinion.
When people work too hard, work efficiency is reduced. (All good here!)

So, I suppose people have to take a rest moderately rest sometimes.
I consider people  to be it important to really to be enjoy life really

Your English is really coming along well! Conversational English, however, isn't usually so formal. I know that Japanese is more formal, but with English, you should relax your speech a bit more. Still, nice vocabulary!  

amaku hikaru

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Thanks for your kind comments.