Law and Justice

Do you think that the legal system always gives justice correctly?


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No I don't think that the legal system always gives justice correctly. Why ?
First because the trials are reached too late after offences happened ; the legal system goes too slowly.
Secondly, the community services are not enough used instead of guilties being sentenced in jail, especially for youngs without education and family care. I think it would be more helpful to give them a second luck, to make them secure and feeling able to do something useful.

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I'm no English teacher and no expert on the legal system, and your exercise was difficult for me too!

Your first sentence is perfect, 2nd sentence is very good, and the 3rd very good although I would word it a bit differently!

No I don't think that the legal system always gives justice correctly. Why ?

Firstly because the trials are reached too late after offences have happened(occured), the legal system acts too slowly.

Secondly, the community services are not used enough. They should be used more instead of sending guilty parties to jail, especially youths without education or family care. I think it would be more useful to give them a second chance, to make them feel secure and feel able to do something useful.

Tres bien!

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merci beaucoup Max :-))))

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No I don't think that the legal system always gives justice correctly. Why ? First, because the trials are reached held too late after offences happened ; the legal system goes too slowly. Secondly, the community services are not used enough used instead in lieu of the guilty being sentenced in to jail, especially for youngs without uneducated youth and family care. I think it would be more helpful to give them a second chanceluck, to make them secure and feeling able to do something useful.

A great sentiment!!  Je enseigne l'anglais dans le prison deux fois par semaine pour les immigrants. Il y a certains, des Mexique et Guatemala, qui n'ont jamais assisté à une journée d'école.

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Bonjour Bill  

merci pour cette correction de qualité et bravo pour votre engagement 

à moi d'apporter ma modeste contribution à vos progrès en français :

J' enseigne l'anglais dans une* prison deux fois par semaine pour les immigrants. Il y en a certains, du** Mexique et du Guatemala, qui n'ont jamais assisté à une journée d'école.

* une : on emploie ici un article indéfini car on ne sait pas où se trouve la prison = une prison quelque part dans votre région - Si vous connais le nom ou le lieu de la prison, vous direz "j'enseigne l'anglais dans la prison de Rickers Island

** Il y en a du Mexique ou du Guatemala  ou vous pouvez dire "Certains du Mexique et du Guatemala n'ont jamais assisté à une journée d'école (la phrase est plus "légère")

ou bien encore "il y a certains Mexicains ou Guatemaltèques qui n'ont ...

Bonne journée

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No, I don't think that the legal system always gives justice correctly. Why ? First, because the verdicts are reached long after the offenses have happened ; the legal system goes too slowly. Secondly, the community services are not used often enough.  Instead, people convicted of crimes are  being sentenced to jail, especially young people who lack education or family ties. I think it would be more helpful to give them a second chance which would make them feel more secure and more  able to do something useful.

Good work!

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I agree with you, Thank you. Good Job.

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i agree with you