Having breakfast

Do you know that breakfast is the most important meal of the day? What do you usually have for breakfast?


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Yes, I already know that, as breakfast is more essential than other meals of the day such as lunch and dinner. I assume that we surely can't feel well to start a new day without having breakfast. It is as if there is somethin' missing that we realize, for instance, lack of concentration is the most clear one realated to this. I even remember some my exams which I wasn't be able to properly focus on solving problems because of this.
For lunch and dinner, I don't see any advantage providing us with something important, except for reduction hunger, these even cause, on the other hand, the feeling of sleeping, especially after dinner.
What do I usually have for breakfast? Now, I live in a dorm in İstanbul, so I have various breakfast products which are mostly prepared that you know, however, I actually can't have a good breakfast, since I wake up too early to go to school, and as a result from this known loss of appetite. It is ometimes just a coffee with a cigarette, but I have enough time to have breakfast richly on Sundays, and it excatly refers my lunch instead of breakfast, it is because I wake up at 11:00-12:00 o'clock on Sundays. Therefore, I am really missing the breakfast together with my family. At home, almost many things are prepared with my mum, and we very rarely use prepared products at breakfast, they just may be olives, butter, eggs and sometimes honey. Except for these, cheese, yogurt, jams, curd, halva, bread and syrup that are inderectly made by woman in our village, above all I love rose jams, but for the production of this kind of rose jam, it required special roses which have delicate leaves. There is a common saying for these roses '' They are the most unruly rose of rough mountains'' and their love is persist in all seasons.

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Yes, I already know that (, as)  breakfast is more essential than the other meals of the day such as lunch and dinner. I assume that we surely can't feel well starting a new day without having breakfast. It is as if we realize that there is something** missing that we realize, for instance, lack of concentration is the most obvious one related to this. I even remember some of my exams during which I wasn't be able to focus properly on solving problems, because of this. For lunch and dinner, I don't see any advantage them providing us with something important, except for reduction of hunger, these even cause, on the other hand, sleepiness, especially after dinner.   What do I usually have for breakfast? Now, I live in a dormitory in İstanbul, so I have various breakfast products which are mostly prepared, as that you know. However, I actually can't have a good breakfast, since I wake up too early to go to school (,) and as a result from this known I have a loss of appetite. It is Sometimes I just have coffee with a cigarette, but I have enough time to have breakfast richly on Sundays. , and It is actually  refers my lunch instead of breakfast, it is because I wake up between 11:00-12:00 o'clock on Sundays. Therefore, I am really missing the breakfast together with my family. At home, almost many things are prepared by my mum (,) and we very rarely use prepared products at breakfast, they may just be olives, butter, eggs and sometimes honey. Except for these, cheese, yogurt, jams, curd, halva, bread and syrup that are indirectly made by women in our village. I love rose jams above all, but for the production of this kind of rose jam, it requires special roses which have delicate leaves. There is a common saying about these roses,  ''They are the most unruly roses of rough mountains'' and their love is persists in all seasons.

I have made it sound a bit better; not everything is necessarily a correction as such.  I always try not to distort what the person has written.     Your English is already well-advanced, so I have rewritten this for you in a way that a native speaker might express your thoughts, in order to help you improve the small things.  Bear in mind that there are always many ways in which one can say something.    **Somethin' is part of spoken English in certain parts of the world.  You should write (and preferably pronounce) it correctly, namely, something.  ontracctions, too, (don't, etc) are part of spoken English.  When you write in a formal context, you need to write the words in full:  do not.   

Yes, I  know that  breakfast is more essential than the other meals of the day.  I maintain that we surely cannot feel well starting a new day without breakfast.  We realize that there is something missing if we skip breakfast, for instance, lack of concentration is the most obvious one / is especially noticeable.     I even remember that I was unable to concentrate properly on solving problems during some of my exams due to having skipped breakfast.  I don't see any advantage to having lunch and dinner as they do not provide us with something important, except reducing hunger.  Rather, they cause sleepiness and lethargy, especially after dinner.   What do I usually have for breakfast? I live in a dormitory  in İstanbul now, so I have various common, ready-made (instant) breakfast products to choose from.   However, I actually cannot have a good breakfast since I wake up too early to go to school and as a result, I have a loss of appetite. Sometimes I just have coffee with a cigarette, but on Sundays I have enough time to have a big breakfast .   Actually, it is lunch  / brunch rather than breakfast since I only I wake up between 11:00-12:00 o'clock.    Therefore, I am really missing  breakfast together with my family.  At home, almost everything is prepared by my mum and we very rarely use prepared products at breakfast except for olives, butter, eggs and sometimes honey. Except for these, cheese, yogurt, jams, curd, halva, bread and syrup are made by women in our village. I love rose jam above all, but for the production of this kind of rose jam, special roses which have delicate leaves are required.  There is a common saying about these roses,  ''They are the most unruly roses of rough mountains'' and their love persists in all seasons.

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It is a pleasure.  Once in a million years I lose my mind and do  things that I simply cannot explain!    :D 

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Great correction from Ctr