The Universe

Do you know any interesting facts about the universe? What are they?


Тinа М.

Тinа М. (61)

Тinа М.
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The most interesting thing in the universe for me is our planet Earth and humans, dwelling on it. The Earth is the perfect home for the existence of a man. There is everything what we need for our life - air, water, light, warmth, soil, fruit, nuts, vegetables, cereals etc. And what a beauty is everywhere around us: green forests, yellow fields, beautiful flowers, blue sky, white clouds, turquoise oceans and seas. And here's another more: a snowflake in the air or the morning dew on the grass, the rainbow in the sky or the northern lights - the aurora borealis, a warm summer rain and the golden autumn! Who is the author? Who is the artist of this beauty? ||
If we look at the man, we will see that he is the most complicated living organism. And what about his spiritual emotions, such as: love, joy, bitterness, hope, sadness, shame, pride, faith, kindness ? What are they? Can we see them or touch them? And one more mystery. Who can explain how does the heartbeat of a baby start pulsating on the fourth week in the mother's womb? ||
A lot of mysteries... . A lot of questions ... . So then, the most interesting facts and miracles are next to us. Our Earth is the miracle, and all that is on it is created for our enjoyment. ||
And ... a little bit more ... only one question! Where did the life come from? ||
Thank you for reading and correcting.

harrylanza

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harrylanza
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Do not start a sentence with "and"
Your text is very good. I made a few changes so that it reads better.

The most interesting thing in the universe for me is our planet Earth and humans dwelling on it. The Earth is the perfect home for the existence of a man. There is everything what that we need for our life - air, water, light, warmth, soil, fruit, nuts, vegetables, cereals etc. And what a Beauty is everywhere around us: green forests, yellow fields, beautiful flowers, blue sky, white clouds, turquoise oceans and seas. And here's another more: Also more beauty like a snowflake in the air or the morning dew on the grass, the a rainbow in the sky, the northern lights - the aurora borealis, a warm summer rain and the golden autumn! Who is the author? Who is the artist of this beauty?
If we look at the man, we will see that he is the most complicated living organism. And What about his spiritual emotions, such as: love, joy, bitterness, hope, sadness, shame, pride, faith and kindness ? What are they? Can we see them or touch them? And Who can explain the mistery of how does the heart beat of a baby start pulsating on the fourth week in the mother's womb?
A lot of mysteries... . A lot of questions ... . So then, the most interesting facts and miracles are next to us. Our Earth is the miracle, and all that is on it is created for our enjoyment.
And ... a little bit more ... Only one more question! Where did the life come from?
Thank you for reading and correcting.

Тinа М.

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Тinа М.
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Dear Friend!

Thank you very much for your  reading, correcting  and your time to improve the text. 

I am ready to help you in studing Russian.

Tetma

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I agree with Harrylanza

Tina , your job is great

Тinа М.

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Тinа М.
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Thank you for your attention.

Роберт С. Гросс

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For me, the most interesting thing in the universe for me is our planet Earth and the humans dwelling on it. The Earth is the perfect home for man's existence. Everything what we need for our life is here:  air, water, light, warmth, soil, fruit, nuts, vegetables, cereals, etc. Beauty is all around us: green forests, yellow fields, beautiful flowers, blue sky, white clouds, and turquoise oceans and seas. Here are some other things: a snowflake in the air or the morning dew on the grass, the rainbow in the sky or the northern lights - the aurora borealis, a warm summer rain, and the golden autumn! Who is the author? Who is the artist of this beauty? || If we look at the man, we will see that he is the most complicated living organism. What about his spiritual emotions such as: love, joy, bitterness, hope, sadness, shame, pride, faith, and kindness ? What are they? Can we see them or touch them? Here is one more mystery. Who can explain how does the heartbeat of a baby start pulsating in the fourth week in the mother's womb? || A lot of mysteries... . A lot of questions ... . So then, the most interesting facts and miracles are next to us. Our Earth is a miracle and all that is on it is created for our enjoyment. || A little bit more ... only one question! Where did the life come from? || Thank you for reading and correcting.

 

Xорошо, Тина.   In English, we do not begin a sentence with the words "and", "but", or "because".  This is a very philosophical response to a busuu question.  As a former Philosophy professor, I appreciate your comments.