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Three years ago, was my worst holiday. We went to a ski resort for skiing. It had a lot of snow and the track was very difficult. We had to put chains on the tires of the car and getting very late there. After all, the next day my husband broke his leg in an attempt to learn skiing. Yes, I can tell it was my wost holiday!!
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BRAVO! - very good indeed. If it helps, this is what I would have written..... My worst holiday was three years ago. We went skiing in a ski resort. It had a lot of snow and the track was very difficult. We had to put chains on the tires of the car and we got there very late. After all that, the next day my husband broke his leg trying to learn to ski. Yes, I can tell it was my wost holiday!! |
| 10/01/2013 07:52 | + 1 |
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Thank you so much!!! Yes, you're very helpfull!! |
| 10/01/2013 07:56 | 0 |
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Three years ago, was my worst holiday. We went to a ski resort for skiing. It had a lot of snow and the track road was very difficult. We had to put chains on the tires tyres of the car and getting got or arrived there very late there. After all, the The very next day my husband broke his leg in an attempt to learn skiing. Yes, I can tell say it was my worst holiday!! As you needed to put chains on the car tyres you would have been on a road, rather than a track. Tires is the spelling for the verb to tire. Got or arrived as your speaking about the past. After all means; in spite of all that has happened (after all, what does it matter?); in spite of one's exertions, expectations etc. (after all that effort it was a waste of time; so you came aftert all). A very good reply. Hope you're not put off skiing!!! |
| 10/01/2013 10:23 | + 1 |
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What can I say? Thank you very very.........much!!!! The truth is that we did not go again!!! |
| 10/01/2013 10:37 | 0 |
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I can understand that, enough to put off the best of us!!! |
| 11/01/2013 09:25 | + 1 |
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I've nothing to add to the corrections above. The only thing I'd say here is about the correction of your word "tires". For me, this American version is OK. Yet, if you stick to the British English then you must have written "tyres". |
| 10/01/2013 14:34 | + 1 |
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Thank you so much for all!!! |
| 10/01/2013 15:41 | 0 |
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You should put everything, not all in this sentence. Corrections would be things and every, in this context, means all. All is used more for amount. Is that all the money you have? That's all my work done for the day! etc. Your English is good. |
| 12/01/2013 09:26 | + 1 |
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Describe your worst holiday ever.