Camping

What kind of items do you usually take on a camping trip?


Тinа М.

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I like camping very much.
I like the early morning hours.
I like to go barefoot on dew.
I like swimming in the sea at dawn.
I like breakfast on the grass.
I like listening to the birds' song.
I like making a bouquet of the wild flowers.
I like looking at the first rays of the sun in the morning.
I like looking at the last rays of the sun in the evening.||
Therefore, when I was a teenager and a student, I used to go camping a lot. I always took a tent, a sleeping bag, a sleeping mat, a torch, matches, some food, water, etc. with me.||
Today, as always, I like going camping, but only for one day - from the dawn till the sunset, and then ... to sleep in the comfortable bed at home.||
Thank you very much for reading and correcting.

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I like camping very much. I like the early morning hours. I like to go barefoot on dew. I like swimming in the sea at dawn. I like breakfast on the grass. I like listening to the birds' song. I like making a bouquet of the wild flowers. I like looking at the first rays of the sun in the morning. I like looking at the last rays of the sun in the evening.|| Therefore, when I was a teenager and a student, I used to go camping a lot. I always took a tent, a sleeping bag, a sleeping mat, a torch, matches, some food, water, etc. with me.|| Today, as always, I like going camping, but only for one day - from the dawn till the sunset, and then ... to sleep in the comfortable bed at home.|| Thank you very much for reading and correcting.

"A nice presntation indeed! There is nothing for me to correct.

One suggestion : There are too many repetitions of the word ' LIKE'. Either combine similarly connected  / linked desires and also or use alternatives to the word"Like." -adore,admire,am fascinated, impressed etc Compound sentences could be tried out.

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Dear Shank !

Thank you very much for your attention. Your suggestions are useful, I  appreciate them. Next time I’ll  take it  into consideration.

Thank you one more time.

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Dear  Friend,

No mention please. What little I know, I would like to share.

I should also thank you. : Shank

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I like camping very much. I like the early morning hours. I like to walk barefoot on the morning dew. I like swimming in the sea at dawn. I like to have breakfast on the grass. I like listening to the bird's songs. I like making a bouquets with wild flowers. I like looking at the first rays of the sun in the morning. I like looking at the last rays of the sun in the evening.|| Therefore, when I was a teenager and a student, I used to go camping a lot. I always took a tent, a sleeping bag, a sleeping mat, a torch, matches, some food, water, etc. with me.|| Today, as always, I like going camping, but only for one day - from the dawn till the sunset, and then I go to sleep in my comfortable bed at home.|| Thank you very much for reading and correcting.

Well done.

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Dear Joel !

Thank you very much for your attention !

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Tina the only change I would make is "I like making a bouquet of wild flowers."  Other than that, again this is very nice work.

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Dear Tom!

Thank you very much!

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Dear Tina, maybe I am a bit fussy, but I would make 2 changes:

- I like making a bouquet of the wild flowers: NO article: it means with some / many flowers. We don't know which flowers. It's not precise. "The" is the definite article.

- .... and then to sleep in ( a ) / my comfortable bed at home! You don't want to sleep anywhere, but in your bed. "The" bed is correct, but I prefer "my" bed to insist on the fact that it is cosier at home!

I would like to draw your attention to Joel's correction: he wrote " a bouquets "! : no "s" of course!

- to the bird's songs means " several songs of 1 bird "

- to the birds' song means " 1 song of several / many birds. ( This is what you meant)

Excellent Tina! You did  a great job!

 

 

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Dear  Marcelle!

Thank you very much for reading and your suggestions. As always they are very useful and make my text better. About "birds' song". Yes, I meant  a song of many birds.