Camping

What kind of items do you usually take on a camping trip?


Тinа М.

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I like camping very much.
I like the early morning hours.
I like to go barefoot on dew.
I like swimming in the sea at dawn.
I like breakfast on the grass.
I like listening to the birds' song.
I like making a bouquet of the wild flowers.
I like looking at the first rays of the sun in the morning.
I like looking at the last rays of the sun in the evening.||
Therefore, when I was a teenager and a student, I used to go camping a lot. I always took a tent, a sleeping bag, a sleeping mat, a torch, matches, some food, water, etc. with me.||
Today, as always, I like going camping, but only for one day - from the dawn till the sunset, and then ... to sleep in the comfortable bed at home.||
Thank you very much for reading and correcting.

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I like camping very much. I like the early morning hours. I like to go barefoot on the dew covered grass. I like swimming in the sea at dawn. I like a picnic breakfast on the grass. I like listening to the birds' song. I like making a bouquet of the wild flowers. I like looking at the first rays of the sun in the morning. I like looking at the last rays of the sun in the evening.|| Therefore, when I was a teenager and a student, I used to go camping a lot. I always took with me a tent, a sleeping bag, a sleeping mat, a torch, matches, some food, water, etc. with me.|| Today, as always, I like going to go day-camping, but only for one day - from the dawn till til [or until]the sunset, and then ... to sleep in the my comfortable bed at home.|| Thank you very much for reading and correcting.

Hardly correcting. Your English is fluent and well written. These are suggestions for writing style. I teach English in High school. I wish my students had your ability for clear description. Keep up the good work.

Тinа М.

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Dear Don!

Thank you very much for your attention and correcting. 

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Thanks!