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How Your T-Shirt Can Make a Difference

Did you know that the t-shirt on your back has a major impact on the planet? Producing it took 2,700 liters of water, plus it takes a lot of energy to get it from the cotton fields to your closet. But some of your t-shirt's biggest impacts are in how you care for it. Here's how you can help reduce its effect on the environment.
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Паола.Josefina (21)

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This is a very interesting and impacting advertisment about how cotton consume water. The dimensions are so big, but the problem is that we don´t realize about the consequences that could bring to all being humans. We should take awareness and start to look after our world.

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This is a very interesting and impacting advertisment about how cotton consume to much water. The dimensions are so big, but the problem is that we don´t realize about the consequences that could bring to all being humans. We should take awareness and start to look after our world.

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This is a very interesting and impactful advertisment about how cotton production consumes water. The dimensions are so big, but the problem is that we don´t realize about the consequences that it brings to all being humans. We should take awareness and start to look after our world.

Very good! Just a few minor suggestions.

 

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Well Done!

This your sentence Revised.

This is a very interesting and impacting advertisment about how cotton consumes water.The dimensions are so big, but the problem is that we don´t realize the consequences that this could bring to all human beings. We should have awareness and start to look after our world.

1. The s was added to pluralize the word. You are stating a action hear, so it needs to be plualized.

2. About is not required here. This is because you are stating a definate opnion, your not "about" to give a discription or an explination. The is the right word in this context.

 

3. You put, "being humans," instead of, "Human beings."

 

4. You Have awareness, you don't take it.

 

Again I want to say well done. I hope I have helped you. Respectfully Ms. Eve

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Thank you a lot