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How Your T-Shirt Can Make a Difference Did you know that the t-shirt on your back has a major impact on the planet? Producing it took 2,700 liters of water, plus it takes a lot of energy to get it from the cotton fields to your closet. But some of your t-shirt's biggest impacts are in how you care for it. Here's how you can help reduce its effect on the environment. |
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This is a very interesting and impacting advertisment about how cotton consume water. The dimensions are so big, but the problem is that we don´t realize about the consequences that could bring to all being humans. We should take awareness and start to look after our world.
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This is a very interesting and impacting advertisment about how cotton consume to much water. The dimensions are so big, but the problem is that we don´t realize about the consequences that could bring to all being humans. We should take awareness and start to look after our world. |
| 18/01/2013 16:42 | 0 |
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This is a very interesting and impactful advertisment about how cotton production consumes water. The dimensions are so big, but the problem is that we don´t realize Very good! Just a few minor suggestions.
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| 18/01/2013 17:27 | + 1 |
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Well Done! This your sentence Revised. This is a very interesting and impacting advertisment about how cotton consumes water.The dimensions are so big, but the problem is that we don´t realize the consequences that this could bring to all human beings. We should have awareness and start to look after our world. 1. The s was added to pluralize the word. You are stating a action hear, so it needs to be plualized. 2. About is not required here. This is because you are stating a definate opnion, your not "about" to give a discription or an explination. The is the right word in this context.
3. You put, "being humans," instead of, "Human beings."
4. You Have awareness, you don't take it.
Again I want to say well done. I hope I have helped you. Respectfully Ms. Eve |
| 19/01/2013 19:30 | + 1 |
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Thank you a lot |
| 21/01/2013 16:21 | 0 |
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