Geography 2

You can get amazed on a daily basic basis if you keep your eyes open. Gaze at the sky in the morning when driving or walking to work. The beauty of it can change your mood in seconds! Go to the park, spend fifteen or twenty minutes by the pond observing nature around you. Your body will relax. Your thoughts will shift toward gratitude and admiration. You can see a rainbow when watering the plants in your own front yard and discover that it's not always an arch, it's a circle! Open your heart and expect a miracle today! No need for special occasion.

GREAT! :D

You can [be/get] amazed on a daily basis if you keep your eyes open. Gaze at the sky in the morning when driving or walking to work. The beauty of it [all] can change your mood in seconds! Go to the park, spend 15 fifteen to 20 twenty minutes by the pond observing nature around you. Your body will relax. Your thoughts will shift toward gratitude and admiration. You can see a rainbow when watering the plants in your own front yard and discover that it's not always an arch, it's a circle! Open your heart and expect a miracle today! There's no need for a special occasion.

Great job. Very impressive. I think the verb you want is "be" amazed, not "get" amazed. Definitely, you want to say "on a daily basis". But gaze at the sky in the morning while driving? Isn't this how accidents happen? :) Look at the road, not the sky. Ha-ha! Also, when walking, watch where you are going. :) Be safe and watch out for the safety of others. But I am just teasing you. You did great. It's not wrong to say fifteen-twenty, but almost all English grammar style guides say to write out the numbers from one to ten and then to use the actual numbers from 11 on, so I changed the written numbers to the actual numbers accordingly. It's not wrong to use a hyphen (-), but to say "15 to 20" or "15 or 20" sounds better than just using the hyphen in this case. What about this: Go to the park and spend 15 to 20 minutes by the pond enjoying the beauty of nature all around you. This way, there is no comma break after "Go to the park," and that makes it flow more smoothly. Sometimes in English, we might say "No need for a special occasion", and the "There's" is understood, but it does sound better to say "There's no need for a special occasion", and it does need the article "a" in front of "special occasion". Very good work.

Спасибо за обмен такой postitive, поднятие сообщении.

You can get be amazed on a daily basis if you keep your eyes open. Gaze at the sky in the morning when driving or walking to work. The beauty of it can change your mood in seconds! Go to the park, spend fifteen-twenty minutes by the pond observing nature around you. Your body will relax. Your thoughts will shift toward gratitude and admiration. You can see a rainbow when watering the plants in your own front yard and discover that it's not always an arch, it's a circle! Open your heart and expect a miracle today! No need for a special occasion.

Excellent:)