Positive feelings

Describe your best friend. What kind of person is he/she?


My best friend is the person most lazy in the world , he is my flatmate and never cleans or cooks something for us , otherwise he is a nice person , pasionate and very confident in his decisions , we usually go to do trekking and surf when are waves on the sea in our free time.
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raphaeela

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raphaeela
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My best friend is the person laziest in the world. He is my flatmate and never cleans or cooks something for us. On the other hand, he is a nice person, pasionate and very confident in his decisions. We usually go to do trekking and surfing when there are waves on the sea in our free time.

Very good! But use less commas and more full stops. Us readers need longer breaks in the text.