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Where do you live? Describe your city.


Peter 13

Peter 13 (51)

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I live in a little city in Bavaria (Germany), near the border to Austria.
Salzburg is a city in Austria and 55 km away.
The population in our city amounts 15.000 peoples.
We have some restaurants, groceries, and other shops.
Around the city where I live, there are many trees, fields, and many ways to cycle.
But we also have big factories in the near, and our jobless rate are very low.
***
And now I take a great cup of tea. :-)

fannywanny

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I live in a little city in Bavaria (Germany), near the border to of Austria. [Besser:  near the Austrian border]

Salzburg is a city in Austria and 55 km away. 

The population in our city amounts is 15.000 peoples["People" is already plural.]

We have some restaurants, grocery stores, and other shops. ["Groceries" usually refers to what one buys at a grocery store.]

Around the city where I live, there are many trees, fields, and many ways to cycling paths.

But we also have big factories in the near vicinity/area, and our jobless rate are is very low.

***

And now I will take a great cup of tea. :-)

Good work!

firewind

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I live in a little city in Bavaria (Germany), near the border to Austria.
Salzburg is a city in Austria and 55 km away.
The population in our city amounts 15.000 peoples.
We have some restaurants,  groceries,grocery stores and other shops.
Around the city where I live there are many trees, fields, and many ways to cycle.
But we also have big factories in the nearearby, and our jobless rate are very low.
***
And now I take a great cup of tea. :-)

I suggest:

I live in a little city in Bavaria (Germany), near the Austrian border.
Salzburg is a city in Austria which is 55 km away.
The population of our city is about 15.000 people (or:citizens= Einwohner) Peoples means *Völker*
We have some restaurants, grocery stores and other shops.
Around the city where I live there are many trees, fields, and a lot of cycling paths.
But we also have big factories nearby so that the unemployment rate is very low.
***
And now I' ll have a great cup of tea. :-)

Well done - good description!

1enaW

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I live in a small city in Bavaria (Germany), near the _ Austrian border. Salzburg is a city in Austria and it is 55 km away. The population of our city is 15.000 peoples. We have some restaurants, grocer's, and other shops. Around the city where I live, there are many trees, fields, and many cycling routesAlthough we also have big factories nearbyso the unemployment rate is very low. *** And now I going to have a great cup of tea. :-)

Great work!

skypilot999

skypilot999

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I live in a little city in Bavaria (Germany), near the border to Austria. Salzburg is a city in Austria and 55 km away. The population in our city amounts 15.000 peoples. We have some restaurants, groceries, and other shops. Around the city where I live, there are many trees, fields, and many ways to cycle. But we also have big factories in the near, and our jobless rate are very low. *** And now I take a great cup of tea. :-)

I live in a little city in Bavaria in Germany, near the border with Austria. Salzburg is a city in Austria, 55 km away. The population in our city amounts to about 15,000 people. We have some restaurants, groceries, and other shops. Around the city where I live there are many trees, fields, and many trails to cycle [OR ...many cylcling pathes]. But we also have big factories near, and our jobless rate is very low. *** And now I'll have a great cup of tea. :-)

A few small errors, but generally very well done.