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When I go to the supermarket, I always go to the food section. It is my favourite section ,because I have a big family and we all like to eat tasty. I always go to the meat section, fish section , fruit and vegetables section and very rarely I go to the section with desserts-only on holidays, as I try to follow the figure.
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More and less ok - does not need correction :) |
| 29/01/2013 23:26 | 0 |
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Try to avoid using the same word too many times. You have used the word "section" four times in the same sentence. I would have said something like ; I have a large family so I go to all the food sections in the supermarket that have meat,fish, fruit and vegetables on sale. On special days I would go to the section that has all the desserts on display. Just to let you know when I go to the supermarket I go to the dessert section a lot as I do not care about my figure. DB |
| 30/01/2013 16:03 | 0 |
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Thanks for your comment , I understood all. Can you eat a lot of sweet and to be slim ? Or you do not care what you look like? I'm not slim , although I don't like sweet , but I often drink some beer with solder fish , nuts, crisps with my friends. Although I know that it is very unhealthy food, I can not deny myself in this pleasure,so - bye-bye my figure! |
| 30/01/2013 21:43 | + 1 |
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Your use of puctuation ? . in your last contact was perfect. Well done. You will see from the following how you can shorten your sentence by the use of punctuation. For instance, when you want write " I can not deny myself " you can put " I can't deny myself". You have already done this when you wrote " I don't like sweets". A further example of this method of writing is: " it is " can be "it's " I no longer care too much about my figure. I'm too old to care. I have to watch the suger though as I do have a bit of high blood preasure and that has to be watched carefully. Where do you come from. I'm from Glasgow in Scotland. I hope my comments are of help to you but it seems to me you are well on your way to writing English. The thing is can you speak it as well as you write it. My English speaking has been criticised as my natural language is Scots and some of the English just don't know what I'm saying. I also like the occasional beer along with nuts and crisps but please tell me one thing. What on earth are Solder Fish. I don't think it's anything we can get in Scotland.DB |
| 31/01/2013 15:28 | 0 |
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I'm sorry! I wrote not correct-- ''solder '' I want to write - salted fish .It is my mistake ! One time I wrote ''I buy two bears'' instead of ''beers''. It was very funnily! Someone asked me- ''It is true,that you can buy bears in Russia in Moscow in the shops? I laughed long. So I write not very well, but I'm afraid, that I speak English even worse. I learn English second year ,but I don't have practiсe, only when I travelling abroad, but it is very rarely- one time in the year on a holiday. With good wishes from Moscow . Natalia. |
| 31/01/2013 23:43 | 0 |
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What is your favourite section in a supermarket?