Geography 2

Good!

nice! sometime i too get confused about my dreams and my real life!

1) it was late autumn( no need for outside)
2) ...... gathered on a weekend.
3) dad made a fire ( a here means it was controlled fire in the stove). Without the "a" fire means an uncontrollable wild fire
4) in THE big Russian stove
5) The adults WERE talking about the LATEST news
6) and THE children WERE playing VARIOUS funny games
7) the strong wind blew
8) for a long time I couldn't FALL ASLEEP
9) I saw A bright light in the sky near my grandmother's house
10) at this moment I noticed that I wasn't the only one who wasn't asleep, so I cried out, " This is a REAL UFO in the sky".
11) almost everyone who WAS in the room
12) UFO came closer
13) Maybe i just dreamed this story.

What great writing! You have a rich vocabulary and your sentence structure is very advanced.

It happened when I was six years old. At the outside there/it was a late autumn. All of our big family had gathered in the grandmother's country house on weekend. My dad made fire into the big Russian stove and in a few minutes it became warm in the room. The evening was very nice. It was noisy in the room. The adults was talking animatedly about last news and children played in different funny games. The nights were already quite/rather cold. It was raining and strong wind blew. When the evening was coming to the end and we were preparing to go to bed, my dad added fire into the stove. It became very hot and stuffy. For long time I couldn't get a dream and I was turning in a bed. Suddenly, when I turned to the window again, I saw something strange. I jumped out of my bed and came slowly to the window. I saw the bright light in the sky near to the grandmother's house. It was a big flying saucer. At this moment I noticed that not only I did not sleep and I cried quietly: "Look! This is a really UFO in the sky!" Almost everyone, who were in the room, came to the windows. They were impressed by this picture. Having noticed our attention the UFO has come nearer to us, then it froze and in a few seconds disappeared in the dark sky. By the way, I am not sure! Maybe this story just dreamed me, but it is the most amazing scene I have ever seen in my life ;)

VERY GOOD AGAIN ALEXANDER

It happened when I was six years old. At the Outside there/  it was a late Autumn. All of our big family had gathered in our grandmother's country house on at the weekend. My dad made a fire into the big Russian stove and in a few minutes it became warm in the room. The evening was very nice. It was noisy in the room. The adults were talking animatedly about the latest news and the children played with different funny games. The nights were already quite/ rather cold. It was raining and a strong wind blew. When the evening was coming to the end and we were preparing to go to bed, my dad added wood to the fire in to the stove. It became very hot and stuffy. For a long time I couldn't get a dream and I was turning in the bed. Suddenly, when I turned to the window again, I saw something strange. I jumped out of my bed and came slowly to the window. I saw the bright light in the sky near to my grandmother's house. It was a big flying saucer. At this moment I noticed that it was not only me who did not sleep and I cried quietly: "Look! There is a real UFO in the sky!" Almost everyone, who were in the room, came to the windows. They were impressed by this picture. Having noticed our attention the UFO came nearer to us, then it froze and in a few seconds disappeared in the dark sky. By the way, I am not sure! Maybe I just dreamed this story, but it is the most amazing scene I have ever seen in my life ;)

It happened (or, "I saw the most amazing thing when...") when I was six years old. It was late autumn(,) and all of (or, "...and everyone in) our big family had gathered in the grandmother's country house for the weekend. The nights were already quite/rather (either word is good) cold(,) and it was raining as a strong wind blew. My dad built a fire into the big Russian stove(,) and in a few minutes it became warm in the room. We were all having a very nice time(:) it was noisy in the room as the adults were talking animatedly about the latest news(,) and the children played in different funny games. As the evening was coming to an end and we were preparing to go to bed, my dad added more fire into the stove(,) and it became very hot and stuffy. For a long time I couldn't get a dream (or, "...get to sleep") and I was turning in a bed (we'll usually say, "...and I was tossing and turning"). Suddenly, when I turned to the window again, I saw something strange. I jumped out of my bed and went slowly to the window. I saw a bright light in the sky near my grandmother's house. It was a big flying saucer(!) At that moment I noticed that I wasn't the only one still awake, and I cried quietly(,) "Look! There is a really UFO in the sky!" Almost everyone in the room came to the windows. They were impressed by this picture (or, "...were amazed by the sight"). Having noticed our attention(,) the UFO came nearer to us, then it froze(,) and in a few seconds disappeared into the dark sky. By the way, I am not sure if this really happened or not! Maybe I only dreamed this story, but it is still the most amazing scene I have ever seen in my life(!) ;)

Great, Alex! I remember something like this from when I was a little boy, and it seemed like most of our neighbors saw it too. But I don't remember if we ever talked about it after that night. Good writing, my friend!