The shopping list

Write your shopping list. What do you normally buy?


Fable Souriante

Fable Souriante

Fable Souriante
I speak:
Polish
I learn:
English
Busuu berries :
6057
  

There are days when we forget about everything completely. We are only human after all, not machines.
Do you remember those moments when you were afraid, that you've lost your memory?
Do you have sometimes the impression, that your contrasting emotions rend you apart?
We have feelings. We are torn in our emotions. We are torn in our thoughts.
While at the same time, I only hope these emotions don't tear me apart.
*****
However, if you have such a moment of weakness whereas you're among the people, exactly what you would want is that they showed charity to you, not rejection, right?
[However, if you had such a moment of weakness whereas you were among the people, exactly what you would wanted was that they showed charity to you, not rejection, right?]
"Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you" or "do not do to others what you would not want them to do to you".
I hope that I'll not disappoint or upset you, if I admit to this that I right now have forgotten what I usually buy. Please forgive me, that I am speaking this to you now.
I am speaking this to you, because I believe you are my friend. Therefore you can understand me.
Always happy when I come here! When I am coming here I didn't want to forget my words to you. This just happened.
However, it's easy not to forget what you want to buy since you can write it all down.
I'll tell you the next time I will see you how to deal with this problem. Thank you for your leniency and patience.

Mon, 02/04/2013 - 13:53
mackar1

mackar1 (72)

mackar1
I speak:
English, German, Russian, Ukrainian
I learn:
English, Spanish, German
Busuu berries :
26616
  

My suggestions:

...We are only human after all, not machines. = We are only human beings after all, not machines.

...when you were afraid, that you've lost your memory? = when you were afraid of having lost your memory?

...Please forgive me, that I am speaking this to you now. + Please forgive me, that I am telling you this now.

...I am speaking this to you, = I am telling you this,

...When I am coming here I didn't want to forget my words to you. This just happened. = When I am coming here it means I didn't want to forget my words to you. This has just happened.

...I'll tell you the next time I will see you how to deal with this problem. = I'll tell you the next time I will see you how to deal with this problem.

...............

Bajkam,  what was it? A confession? The only thing you had to do was to look through your last shopping list and compile it into a short answer.

 04/02/2013 12:53
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Mon, 02/04/2013 - 14:19
Fable Souriante

Fable Souriante

Fable Souriante
I speak:
Polish
I learn:
English
Busuu berries :
6057
  

Hello Mackar! Nice to see you ;) Thank you for all your help and suggestions :))

Yes, I needed to confess my sins to my friends I've sinned against..

Joking aside/apart, my approach is perhaps a little unconventional for you, but for me it's the most effective way to learn. I want to be able to express my feelings and thoughts properly in English.
 

 04/02/2013 13:19
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Mon, 02/04/2013 - 20:05
darrel68

darrel68 (44)

darrel68
I speak:
English
I learn:
Russian
Busuu berries :
22546
  

I like your style of writing, however or you needed  to write is a shopping list but still very good.

 04/02/2013 19:05
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Tue, 02/05/2013 - 10:16
Fable Souriante

Fable Souriante

Fable Souriante
I speak:
Polish
I learn:
English
Busuu berries :
6057
  

Hello :))) Thank you for your opinion :))) A shopping list will be soon available...

 

05/02/2013 09:16
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Sun, 02/10/2013 - 23:33
orzyszpon

orzyszpon (65)

orzyszpon
I speak:
English
I learn:
French
Busuu berries :
943
  

There are days when we forget about everything completely. We are only human(s) after all, not machines.Do you remember those moments when you were afraid, that you've lost your memory?Do you have sometimes the impression, that your contrasting emotions rend you apart?We have feelings. We are torn by our emotions. We are torn by our thoughts (torn in our minds). At the same time, I can only hope these emotions don't tear me apart.*****However, if you have such a moment of weakness and you find yourself among the people, exactly what you would hope that they would show you charity to you, not rejection, right Do unto others as you would have them do unto you (biblical language)" or "do not do to others what you would not want them to do to you (super)".I hope that I'll not disappoint or upset you, if I admit to this that I right now have forgotten what I usually buy. Please forgive me, that I am speaking about this to you now.I am telling this to you, because I believe you are my friend. Therefore, you can understand me. I am always happy when I come here! When I come here I do not want to forget what to say to to you. This just happened.However, it's easy not to forget what you want to buy since you can write it all down.I'll tell you the next time I will see you how to deal with this problem. Thank you for your leniency and patience.

OK.

 10/02/2013 22:33
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