This video shows us the hard work of the salt mine workers in Mali. Since the eleventh century the salt mine has been working in the small village of Taoudenit. The abrasive salt sand eats away the workers' bodies and many of them have sores all over their feet and hands, but there are neither doctors nor help for them there. Salt miners prepare salt tablets which are then loaded then onto the camels and it takes for about fourteen days for caravans to deliver them, crossing the desert, to Timbuktu. Reading the direction from the stars and suffering from the water shortage, the caravans moves ahead just as they did a thousand years ago.

This video shows us the hard work of the salt mine workers in Mali. Since the eleventh century the salt mine has been working in a small village called Taoudenit. The abrasive salt sand eats away workers' bodies and many of them have sores all over their feet and hands, but there are neither doctors nor help for them there.

Salt miners prepare salt tablets which are loaded onto camels and it takes about fourteen days for the caravan to deliver them, crossing the desert to Timbuktu. Reading directions from the stars and suffering from the water shortage, the caravan moves ahead just as it did thousands of years ago.

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This video shows us (replace the for a) hard work of the salt mine workers in Mali.

Since the eleven century the salt mine has been work( replace ed, for ing) in a small village called Taoudenit. The abrasive salt sand eats away workers' bodies and many of them have sores all over their feet and hands, but there are (I think replace no for neither) doctors nor help for them there. Salt miners prep(are) salt tablets which are loaded then (then loaded) on the camels and it takes (for it is not needed i think you made a typo error )about fourteen days for the caravan to deliver them, crossing the desert, to Timbuktu. Reading direction from the stars and suffering from the water shortage,(the) caravan moves ahead just as it did thousand years ago.

very very good. The neither would work but I felt you were over complicating it. 

Congratulations on your use of neither and nor!

This video shows us the hard work of the salt mine workers in Mali. Since the eleventh century the salt mine has been working in the a small village of Taoudenit. The abrasive salt sand eats away workers' bodies and many of them have sores all over their feet and hands, but there are neither doctors nor help for them there. Salt miners prepearare salt tablets which are loaded then on the camels and it takes for about fourteen days for the caravan to deliver them, crossing the desert, to Timbuktu. Reading direction from the stars and suffering from the water shortage, the caravan moves ahead just as it did thousand years ago.

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