Valentine´s Day

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basia.kowalska

basia.kowalska (33)

basia.kowalska
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torn down the blood and red wine
drunk nostalgia where they live delusions of thought
since the world began love trembles constantly
at the end loneliness
I wrote very quickly, probably is stupid :P

Gafuso

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maybe don't be stupid... maybe you could be a good poetry or very sensible girl  

you have good use of phrasal verbs and the modals words 

Jemima88

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Very poetic! It isn't stupid at all. The poem reads quite well

The last sentence would be correct English if it was written as this, 'I wrote this very quickly, it's probably stupid'

It's not though! You are doing a great job, keep it up and I look forward to reading more poetry

basia.kowalska

basia.kowalska (33)

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Thank you very much :). I write poetry, I have a little success already :D :P

Jemima88

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That's great to hear. As I said, I look forward to reading more of it :)

torn down the blood and red wine

drunk nostalgia where there live delusions of thought

since the world began love trembles constantly

and at the end... loneliness

 

I wrote very quickly, probably is stupid :P

I think this is very good Basia! I have added two words...what do you think?

Paul

Beto GN Flores

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Torn down the blood and red wine drunk nostalgia where they live delusions of thought since the world began love trembles constantly at the end loneliness I wrote very quickly, probably is stupid :P

 

The first sentence does not make sense.  The last 2 are very profound!