Valentine´s Day

The day when I have met you was the most beautiful day of my life. Your hair is the most unruly rose from rough mountains.  I want a kid with you.  Her eyes  should look like yours look.  With glances that kindles the inside of those who look at her.  Straight as a die, just like me.   A little crazy, just like you!  With each word, like our love! It melts the dark  For you, for you! I pull the rope of this world.  One strand of your hair.  Don't know, that I delete everything.   You know, you are everything to me.  You are the one I beware of my eyes.   In the deepest well in my heart. I have saved.

I have to say, that I am not sure of this review of mine.  Since it is a poem, we are dealing with poetic licence, which means that you have greater freedom of expression.   Since I am really dumb when it comes to poetry, I am not sure that I have understood everything  ;).   The last three sentences are unclear to me, so I have left them as is.   I am sorry that I cannot be of more help this time. 

The day when I met you was the most beautiful day of my life.

You hair is the wildest rose from rough mountains.

I want to have children with you.

Your eyes as you look with glances

kindles the inside of those who look at you. 

Straight as a die, just like me!

A little crazy, just like you!

With each word, like our love!

It melts the dark winters.

For you, for you!

I pull the rope of this world.

One strand of your hair.

Don't know, that I delete everything.

You know, you are everything for me.

You are the one I beware of my eyes

In the deepest well in my heart.

I have been saved.

Very poetic!

Oha yarıldım burda :D:D