A few issues with commas and punctuation but very good overall.

First of all she shows the liquid ingredients you need to serve on the pancakes. Then she presents the dry and wet ingredients to prepare the pancakes.

She mixes the dry and wet ingredients together for about five minutes.

Then she heats up a greased pan and pours the mix on it, flits the sides and takes off to serve with the sauce of orange juice.

The video shows K.C. Quaretti teaching us how to make her orange and ricotta pancakes to serve for her favourite breakfast.  It sounds very easy and delicious to make them/They sound very easy and delicious to make.  First of all she shows the liquid ingredients you need to serve on the pancakes, then she presents the wet and dry ingredients for making the pancakes.  After that, she starts the preparation method, boiling the sauce ingredients and setting them aside to cool.  She mixes the wet and dry ingredients together for about five minutes.  The she heats up agreased pan and pours the mixture into it, flips the pancake over to cook both sides and then takes it off to serve with the orange sauce.