Episode 6 - Race against time

What chores do you do in your house?


giseleredes

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I don't have any chore in the week because I work and study all day and night.
But on the weekend I clean my bedroom, wash my dirty, and help my mon with some other chores.

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I don't have any chores during the week because I work and study all day and night. But on the weekend I clean my bedroom, wash my dirty clothes, and help my mom with some other chores.

This is very good but here are a couple of things:

You can just say "wash my clothes". It's obvious what you mean. "Dirty" is a little strong. It suggests they have mud or dirt on them which they probably don't.

You shouldn't start a sentence with "but". It contradicts what was said before so you can't start with it. You could write: "I don't have any chores during the week, because I work and study all day and night, but on the weekend I clean my bedroom..."

Hope this helps,

Iain.

 

 

 

rozsews

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   ( wash my dirty clothes )  good job.

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some mistakes but tried good