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SI Swimsuit 2013: Antarctica

Go around the world with Sports Illustrated for the making of SI Swimsuit 2013. Watch the special Sunday, February 17 at 8|7c. For more: http://www.travelchannel.com/tv-shows/si-swimsuit-2013
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I'm pretty stoked about this video! Busuu brings its customers a lot of fun putting such videos in the "Live Units". What do I like about this video? I definitely like all in this video because it shows me a very pretty and almost totally naked girl in Antarctica. Commenting such videos gives me much more pleasure than commenting the boring articles about philosophers or China's pork.
The girl in a bikini looks very nice in the snow background and I hope she got a good fee for this "cold" work. For what purpose did she do it? For getting money, for gladdening our eyes, maybe for having fun (if standing naked in the snow can be called a fun). Let's not spoil the mood by talking so much. Watch and enjoy.))

I'm pretty stoked about this video! Busuu brings its customers a lot of fun putting such videos in the "Live Units". What do I like about this video? I definitely like all in of this video because it shows me a very pretty and almost totally naked girl in Antarctica. Commenting such videos gives me much more pleasure than commenting the boring articles about philosophers or China's pork. The girl in a bikini looks very nice in the snow background and I hope she got a good feel for this "cold" work. For what purpose did she do it? For getting the money, for gladdening our eyes, maybe for having fun (if standing naked in the snow can be called a fun?). Let's not spoil the mood by talking so much. Watch and enjoy.))

I would rather watch You! :)

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Thank you, Original Thinker!)) I hope next video will be about me somewhere in Bali.))

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I'm pretty stoked about this video! Busuu brings its customers a lot of fun by putting such videos in the "Live Units". What do I like about this video? I definitely like all everything in this video because it shows me a very pretty and almost totally naked girl in Antarctica. Commenting on such videos gives me much more pleasure than commenting on the boring articles about philosophers or China's pork. The girl in a bikini looks very nice in with the snow background and I hope she got a good fee for this "cold" work. For what purpose Why did she do it? She might have done it for getting the money, or for gladdening our eyes pleasing the viewers, or maybe just for having the fun of it (if standing naked in the snow can be called a fun). Let's not spoil the mood by talking so much. Watch and enjoy.))

The red corrections are necessary corrections. Those in green & underlined are suggestions to make it sound better and less 'foreign'. Overall, this is excellent work! By the way, "I'm pretty stoked about...."???  You didn't learn that at busuu.com!  :)

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Thank you very much, Dotmcp! You are right, "I'm pretty stoked" it's from www.china232.com. I learn English there also.
Have a nice weekend!))

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I hope that china232 has also told you that that phrase is definitely slang, or colloquial! 

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Sure, it has.)) Do you think it's not good to use a slang writing busuu exercises? I'd like to know your opinion about this, if you don't mind.

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Oops!  I just noticed another small mistake. At the end, where you wrote "if standing in the snow can be called a fun", the "a" does not belong there. It should just be "...can be called fun."

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I've got it! Thank you, Dorothy!))

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The video will not play in this part of the world.    However, if I need to look at a young woman dressed in this way I need only take the thirteen minute drive to my local beach any day of the week.

I wish I could see it and see what it is that convinces you that the girl and the photographer actually travelled to Antarctica!

For your information, "stoked" is seldom heard here.   It is sometimes used by teenagers but is getting a little worn and replaced by other teen-talk.

Congratulations on, once again, giving us a little bit of interesting reading.  

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Thank you, John!
Ok. I'll try to avoid using it.
Have a nice weekend!