Episode 8 - Picnic in the park

I like animals very much. I have two lovely dogs.  Their names are Bebe and Bug. Bebe is taller than Bug.  Bebe lives outside the house in the kennel.  Bug is a Lhasa Apso and he lives inside the house with me. They like playing all the time.  I have fun so much with them.

Remember that in English, you cannot connect two main clauses with a comma.  You must use a semi-colon or a conjunction like "and", or make them separate sentences, as I did above.

Good work!
 

Bebe is taller than Bug.
Bebe lives outside the house ...
They like playing all the time, I have so much fun with them.

My l'ordinateur is not allowing me to copy and highlight your exercise, read and compare:)

Very Good:)

I like animals very much. I have two lovely dogs, their names are Bebe and Bug. Bebe is tallesr than Bug. Bebe lives outside the house in the kennel. Bug is a Lhasa Apso and he lives inside the house with me. They like playing all the time. I have fun so much with them.---very good!!!!

I like animals very much. I have two lovely dogs, their names are Bebe and Bug. Bebe is tallest than Bug, Bebe lives out side the house in the kennel, Bug is a Lhasa Apso and he lives inside the house with me. They like playing all time, I have fun so much with them.

Another  good  piece  of  work  Vera   a  few  adjustments  are  needed  but  still  good  work.

Yes  I  like  animals  very  much, I own  two  lovely  dogs  called  Bebe and  Bug. Bebe  is  the  tallest  of  the  two and  lives  outside  in a  kennel. Bug, the  Lhasa Apso lives with  me  in the  house. I  have  so  much  fun  with  them  and  they  love  playing  all  the  time .

Well  done  Vera  a  very  good  effort  !!!!!