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She is so kind , ambitious, cheerful , smart and friendly :) .
I love her so much ,she is my best friend ever :)
And I call her Ush :P
I love her so much ,she is my best friend ever :)
And I call her Ush :P
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Sat, 03/02/2013 - 12:26
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Well done. You are very smart in telling fiction story since such person has been extinct long before. Way to go! But as a tip; if you write about 4 or 5 girls or change she with he it would be more believable for reader unless you want to tell something very ideal or impossible by attributing them to one girl. (with all due respect for girls, don’t killing me, just kidding)))))). |
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Sat, 03/02/2013 - 15:59
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well saying :)
don’t |
| 02/03/2013 14:59 | + 1 |
Sat, 03/02/2013 - 18:18
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Hahahah , but she is very nice and lovely person for real :) Ofcourse she has some bad things but the good part is the most in her charachter :) Just like you Ali :p And don't be afraid , we wont kill you , we will vanish you from the earth ::))))))) I' m kidding you know ;) |
| 02/03/2013 17:18 | + 1 |
Sat, 03/02/2013 - 18:50
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to all fans, i have one good and one bad news. good news that due to your demand i am going to vanish form earth, the bad news is it would be just 5 hours down to this fact that my return flight to Iran would not last more. thank you for all supports, ;DDDD.
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Sat, 03/02/2013 - 18:20
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Hahahah , but she is very nice and lovely person for real :) Ofcourse she has some bad things but the good part is the most in her charachter :) Just like you Ali :p And don't be afraid , we wont kill you , we will vanish you from the earth ::))))))) I' m kidding you know ;) |
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Wed, 03/06/2013 - 10:55
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I think we should "terminate" you. This would be more accurate:-) |
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Sat, 03/02/2013 - 15:55
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Perfect! |
| 02/03/2013 14:55 | + 1 |
Describe your best friend. What kind of person is he/she?