Are you searching for a job?

I do not know (I'm not sure) if (whether) the above question is correct. (It is.) In my opinion, the following sentences would be correct: How did you get your last job? or How did you find your last job? I can imagine that I could use these sentences interchangeably.

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Before I answer the question on my last job, I have to admit that I never got a job by knowing people, but always by and through my own strengths.

And now, to answer the question.

First, I found a job ad on the Internet.

Afterwards, I made ​​sure that I met all the requirements.

I researched the most important information on the firm on the Internet .

I wrote a truthful resume and cover letter.

I sent my application documents to the e-mail address given on the website in the advertisement for the job.

I prepared for the interview.

I read about chemical issues relevant to the position I applied for.

I filled in the gaps in my knowledge of the chemistry of surfactants.

Perhaps 2 weeks later I received a phone call for an interview.

When I arrived at the interview, I was dressed simply, but elegantly, and without makeup.

I gave witty, clever, and to-the-point answers.

In a timely fashion, I was invited for a follow-up interview with the company director, who told me that I had the job. At the end of the meeting, we discussed my salary requirements.

I am currently self-employed, but in a few months I want to try to fight for a job.

Please wish me luck because there is high of unemployment in Poland.

I hope I'll get my dream job someday.

At the end of my essay, I have to admit that my current boss has taught me a lot about myself. Even though she has been my biggest critic, she has been also my biggest fan. :) She still uses the carrot and the stick approach.

In English, you should almost always use a comma before the word "but" and almost never before the word "because."

I do not don't know (I'm not sure) [both ok] if (whether) [both ok] the above question is correct. In my opinion, the following sentences will would be correct: How did you get your last job? or How did you find your last job? [nice use of a colon] I can imagine that I can use these sentences interchangeably. ------------------------------------------ Before I answer the question on about my last job I have to admit that I never got a job by knowing people but always by and through my own strengths. And now, to answer a the question. First, I found a job ad on the Internet. Afterwards, I made ​​sure that I met all the requirements. I researched the most important information on about the firm on the Internet . I wrote a truthful resume and cover letter. I sent my application documents to the e-mail address given on the website in the advertisement for the job. I prepared for the interview. I read about chemical issues associated with the work regarding the position I applied for. I filled in gaps in my knowledge of about the chemistry of surfactants. Perhaps 2 two weeks later I received a phone call for an interview. When I arrived at the interview, I was dressed simply but elegantly and without makeup. I gave witty, clever, and to-the-point answers. [or "and direct answers"]. In a timely fashion, I was invited for a follow-up interview with the company director, who told me that I had the job. At the end of the meeting, we discussed my salary requirements. I am currently self-employed, but in a few months I want to try to fight for a new job. Please wish me luck, because there is high of unemployment in Poland. I hope I'll get my dream job someday. At the end of my essay, One last thing: I have to admit that my current boss has taught me a lot about myself. Even though she has been my biggest critic, she has also been also my biggest fan:) She still uses the carrot and the stick approach.

GREAT WORK!  This is one of your best essays yet (although perhaps not as entertaining as the movie script about the office supply revolt) - lots of adverbs and compound sentences, and well punctuated.  Nearly all my "corrections" are simply suggestions.

I do not know (I'm not sure) if (whether) the above question is correct. In my opinion, the following sentences would (bylyby) be correct: How did you get your last job? or How did you find your last job? I can imagine that I can use these sentences interchangeably. ------------------------------------------ Before I answer the question about my last job I have to admit that I never got a job by knowing people but always by and through my own strengths. And now, to answer the question. First, I found a job ad on the Internet. Afterwards, I made ​​sure that I met all the requirements. I researched the most important information on the firm on the Internet . I wrote a truthful resume and cover letter. I sent my application documents to the e-mail address given on the website in the advertisement for the job. I prepared for the interview. I read about chemical issues associated with the work regarding the position I applied for. I filled in gaps in my knowledge of the chemistry of surfactants. Perhaps 2 weeks later, I received a phone call for an interview. When I arrived at the interview, I was dressed simply but elegantly and without makeup. I gave witty, clever, and to-the-point answers. In a timely fashion, I was invited for a follow-up interview with the company director, who told me that I had the job. At the end of the meeting, we discussed my salary requirements. I am currently self-employed, but in a few months I want to try to fight for a job. Please wish me luck, because there is high of unemployment in Poland. I hope I'll get my dream job someday. At the end of my essay, I have to admit that my current boss has taught me a lot about myself. Even though she has (had = since before past) been my biggest critic, she had also been my biggest fan:) She still uses the carrot and the stick approach.

It is one approach, not two, hence "the carrot and stick" approach.  Small changes here and there. The organization of the essay is logically laid out (wylozona). Good luck, indeed.