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Hi friends :-) I'm on this website since a longtime. Today, I have an exercice for the school. Can you correct me the mistakes, please?
Here is my text:
The tale of the three mice
Once upon a time, a young woman who will buy a cat and called it Adrien. This woman had need company because she lived alone in her home. The cat, from the first day in her house, saw three little mice. They used to get lunch. Seeing the cat, the mice were afraid, then they were entertained to bother Adrien. Therefore Adrien tried to catch them in several reprise but he seemed powerless. After an exhausting night, the mice decided to left the house because they were sick of being driven by the cat. In the street, the mice took the road to the south to have the heat but the destination of the three mice will be completely different. Indeed, a storm broke. They put sheltered when suddenly the water mounted. The mice, not knowing cope with this flood, were swept and fell in a sewer. This is in this moment that they lose sight. Unfortunately, the three mice don't arrive to join. The first mouse, called Gus, landed in the magical kingdom of Cinderella. The second, called Ratatouille, found himself in Paris and the third called Stuart Little landed in a wealthy family of the French capital. Physically, Gus was neither big neither thin. He was always the first to eat. He liked to amuse and that's why he didn't realize the situation. He thought that these brothers made a joke hiding. He had landed in a wood and sought Ratatouille and Stuart Little during more than half past three. It was the nightfall, Gus was across from a very beautiful castle. Frightened, He advanced and entered in the castle. In the first room, he saw a lovely girl who was making the household. He approached her. Her name is Cinderella. Cinderella, furious, tried to get out. But Gus helped her and therefore Cinderella accepted it. Regarding Ratatouille, he was lean and shy. Arriving to Paris, he was amazed seeing skyscrapers. For him, his dream became reality, everything was so magic. He remembered that the woman watched every day the emission "chief gusto". Ratatouille found the emission very interesting and already saw himself to prepare good flat its customers. Therefore, he began looking for this restaurant asking help to the mice and rats. Arrived on the scene, Ratatouille fall asleep in waiting the next day. The third brother, called Stuart Little, had more likely to find a house because he landed in the bathroom of a large home. He also began to seek his brothers without much change. Two days later, we could see that the three mice were pleased in their new life. Indeed, Gus and Cinderella well amused together, they danced, played...Moreover, the chores were done more rapidly because Gus invited the animals of the wood. That's why Cinderella asked to her family to go to the party to have the occasion of dance with the charming prince. But that woman, who was considered as a witch, refused because she wanted it to be her daughters. Cinderella cried. The animals found a solution by making a beautiful dress. Concerning Ratatouille, he explored the large kitchen of the restaurant. He had a friend who is an apprentice. He has a lot of difficulties to cook. Ratatouille wanted to help him. However, the colleagues of the apprentice surprised him and he was nearly fired. That's why, he had to find a solution. Ratatouille hided in the hat and handled the apprentice pulling his hair. At first, It was very hard, but after a few weeks, they were a very good team because all two have made outstanding efforts. The third mouse, Stuart Little, quickly adapted in the family. He played a lot with the child who had small planes, trains, and also little cars. The only problem was the cat but after a few weeks, they got along well together. The child and Stuart participated in a competition of boat and they won. Finally, the three mice lived a very good experience but their brother miss them. That’s why, a day, they left their family and went in the native home. All three had the same idea and finding themselves, they had a lot of things to talk about.
Thank you very much for reading my text and correcting. See you soon !!! :p

Aa2011

Aa2011

Aa2011
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Hi, friends :-)  I've been on this website for a long tme. Today, I have an exercise for school. Can you correct my mistakes, please?  Here is my text:                          

                                                           The Tale of the Three Mice

Once upon a time, a young woman bought a cat and called it Adrien. This woman needed company because she had been living alone in her home. The cat, from the first day in her house, saw the three little mice while they were eating. When the mice saw the cat, at first they became afraid, but later on the mice were amused. They teased Adrien, who repeatedly tried to catch them, yet seemed powerless to do so.

After an exhausting night, the mice decided to leave the house because they were sick of being chased by the cat. In the street, the mice took the road to the southtoward a warmer climate, but each of the three mouse destinations was to be completely different.

Indeed. A storm broke out. They had just put up shelter when suddenly the water rose. The mice, not knowing how to cope with a flood, were swept up and fell into a sewer. It was at this moment that they lost sight of each other. Consequently, the three mice could not join up with each other now.

The first mouse, called Gus, landed in the magical kingdom of Cinderella. The second, called Ratatouille, found himself in Paris; and the third, called Stuart Little, landed with a wealthy family in the French capital.          

                    ~                              ~                               ~                                     ~

Physically, Gus was neither big nor thin, and he was always the first to eat. He also liked to joke, and that is why he did not understand the situation. He thought his brothers had played a joke by hiding from him. 

Later on, he landed in a wood. Then, he sought Ratatouille and Stuart Little for several hours. It was now nightfall. Across from Gus was a very beautiful castle. Although frightened, he advanced and entered the castle. In the first room, he saw a lovely girl who was doing household chores. He approached her. Her name was Cinderella. Helpless, Cinderella had been unsuccessfully trying to get out, but Gus offered to help her, and Cinderella accepted it.

Regarding Ratatouille, he was lean and shy. Upon arriving in Paris, he was amazed, seeing skyscrapers! For him, his dream had become reality. Everything was so magical. He remembered that the woman with the cat had watched the program, "Chief Gusto" every day. Ratatouille had found this program very interesting and was already seeing himself preparing excellent dishes for its customers. Soon after, he began looking for this restaurant and began asking help from mice and rats. When he finally arrived there, Ratatouille fell asleep, awaiting the next day...

The third brother, called Stuart Little, more than likely had found a home because he landed in the bathroom of a large house. He also began to seek his brothers, though without much success.

Two days later, one could see that the three mice were pleased with their new lives. Indeed.

Gus and Cinderella were having a lot of fun together, dancing and playing. Moreover, the chores were being done more rapidly because Gus brought over the forest animals to help. .Next, Cinderella asked her family if she could go to the ball, which would give her the chance to dance with the charming prince, but her wicked stepmother refused because she wanted that experience for her daughters. At which point, Cinderella broke down and cried. Soon after, the animals found the solution and made a beautiful dress for her...

Concerning Ratatouille, he had been exploring the restaurant's large kitchen. He had also made friends with an apprentice there, who was having a lot of cooking difficulties. Ratatouille wanted to help him. One day, unfortunately, the apprentice's colleagues paid him a surprise visit, and when they saw him cooking -- alongside a mouse! he was nearly fired. Now, Ratatouille had to find a solution. So, he hid in the apprentice's hat and directed him by pulling on his hair. At first, it was very hard, but after a few weeks, they made a very good team because both had made outstanding efforts.

The third mouse, Stuart Little, had quickly adapted to his new family. He played a lot with their child, who had small planes, trains, and also little cars. The only problem was the cat, but after a few weeks, they got along well together. The child and Stuart even participated in a boating competition, and they won!

In the end, the three mice had had a very good experience. Now, each missed their brothers. That is why one day they left their new families and went back to their native home. It so happened that the three mice had the same idea in mind and after finding themselves together again, they had a lot of things to talk about.

Thank you very much for reading and correcting my text. See you soon !!! :p!

Aa2011

Aa2011

Aa2011
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Ç'était plus que 700 mots! Bravo!