At the hairdresser's

I don't go to the hairdresser so often, only when I want my hair to be cut in layers, to be trimmed and have a blow dry or to have a hairstyle...despite my going there my own haircare is very important for my hair...it always needs my care...it is like a sensitive flower

Excellent

I don't go to the hairdresser so often, only when I want my hair to be cut in layers, to be trimmed and blow dried them or to be hairstyled...despite my going there my own haircare is very important for my hair...it always needs care (from us)*...it is like a sensitive flowers **

* you don't really need to say this

** we usually characterise the hair on our head as a singular object.  So we say "It is" instead of "they are" etc

Well done!  This is very good, as usual!  Keep up the excellent work!