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Describe what your week is like, what do you usually do each day?


David1890

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Mondays are so boring bucause I should go to College at 7 am, on thuesday I can to sleep until 9 am cause my class starts at half past ten, on wednesday I don't have class so I can sleep and watch TV all day but I prefer to play tennis with my friends at the afternoon, on thursday I should wake up at 6 am cause I need a lot time for runing on the street or on the park with my friends and then i come back to my house, i take a short shower and go to the College, at the wekeed I like so much to watch TV, lesten music, and go out with my friends and to know new people...

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Mondays are so boring because I should go to College at 7 am, on thuesday I can to sleep until 9 am because my class starts at half past ten, on wednesday I don't have class so I can sleep and watch TV all day but I prefer to play tennis with my friends at in the afternoon, on thursday I should wake up at 6 am cause I need a lot time for runing on the street or on the park with my friends and then I come back to my house,I take a short shower and go to the College, at the wekeed weekend I like so much to watch TV, listen to music, and go out with my friends and to know new people...

Excellent job

Stuart Race

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Wow - you have written a lot here and it's very good!  Just a few, little errors.

 

Mondays are so boring buecause I should have to go to College at 7 am, on thuesday I can to sleep until 9 am 'cause my class starts at half past ten. On wednesday I don't have class so I can sleep and watch TV all day but I prefer to play tennis with my friends at in the afternoon. On thursday I should wake up at 6 am 'cause I need a lot of time for runing on the street or on in the park with my friends and then iI come back to my househome, i take a short shower and go to the College, at the wekeed weekend I like so much to watch TV, listen to music, and go out with my friends and to know meet new people...

So explanations....

1. I crossed out 'should' and changed it to have.  Otherwise, it sounded like you were going to say

"Mondays are so boring because I SHOULD go to college at 7am but I have to go in earlier and sit and superivise students - boring!"  If you use Should - then normally it means you will then do something different.

2. You should always use a CAPTIAL letter when writing days of the week - but I didn't correct you here, but next time, try using a capital letter when writing Monday.

3. use 'in' when talk about afternoon/morning/evening.  Use at for Weekend.

I'll see you in the evening.  

I'll see you at the weekend.

4. Home is better than saying - my house - in your exercise.  It's more common and 'normal'

5.  When writing about music - you need the 'to'  Listen to music. He listens to music.  I listen to music.

6.  Meet new people rather than know.  you have to meet them before you then get to know them.

Hope that helps.  Well done - you are writing a lot.  I need to do the same with my italian!!!

Stuart 

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Mondays are so boring bucause I should go to College at 7 am, on thuesday I can to sleep until 9 am cause my class starts at half past ten, on wednesday I don't have class so I can sleep and watch TV all day but I prefer to play tennis with my friends at the afternoon, on thursday I should wake up at 6 am cause I need a lot time for runing on the street or on the park with my friends and then i come back to my house, i take a short shower and go to the College, at the wekeed I like so much to watch TV, lesten music, and go out with my friends and to know new people..

Mondays are so boring because I have to go to college at 7 am. Tuesdays I can sleep until 9 am because my class starts at half past ten.  Wednesdays (pl) I don't have class so I can sleep and watch TV all day but I prefer to play tennis with my friends in the afternoon. Thursdays I wake up at 6 am because I need a lot of time for running down the street or in the park with my friends and then I come back to my home so that I can take a short shower and then go to class. The week ends I  like to watch TV, listen to music and going out with my friends to meet new people.

Very good,just a few minor errors. First, you don't need to start each sentence with "On". Start with just the name of the day and be sure to make it plural.  EX: Mondays I have to go to school early. Tuesdays I can sleep....... 

Use "because" instead of "cause", it's more proper.

When going out "to run" or "running" you can say it different ways. I thought "running down the street or in the park" sounded much better then "running in the street or park". When you go running you can run down the street, up the street, in the street, on the street. Depends on how you are using it in the sentence. EX: This morning I am going to run down the street to the park... This morning I am going to run up the street to the park...Today I think I am going to run on the street and down to the park...I like ot run in the street because the sidewalks have too many people using them.

After running in the park with friends and coming home (home is more commonly used rather then house) you want to say you "come home so that I can take a short or quick shower and then go to class. We already know you are in college because of the first sentence. At this point we would normally say "then I go to class".

On the week ends I watch TV, listen to music and going out with my friends to meet new people. You can also say: On the week ends I watch TV, Listen to music then go out with my friends to meet new people. By using "then" you are giving an account by time what you do on the week ends. You watch TV, listen to music then go out with friends to meet new people.

I hope this helps some :-) Keep up the good work and GREAT to see more then just one sentence!