What I don't want to be like

Look at these photographs. How do these people feel? Why are they like that? What might have happened to them?


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Hullo! What a nice pleasure. Those donkeys resting in the shade of trees even don't feel in this pleasure. He is really sleeping like babies or maybe little bear cubs. These kind of people are normally called lazy, but I would prefer to redefine them as huge wood blocks.
The girl in the second photo might be touchy and I guess someone has hurt her. People actually try to pay more attention to sensitive ones while talking.
The woman looks like a little naughty girl who cries and acts like in this photo when you don't give the things they want, for instance toys or junk food. In fact she might be so busy and tired, even doesn't know what else to be done right now. So, I would say '' come on! shake it up, man, to the age and state of life!

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Hullo!  Hello! What a nice pleasure.  Normally:  What a pleasure!  What a nice surprise!   What a pleasure it is for me!  What a pleasure to meet you!   I cannot say I have ever heard your expression. 

Those donkeys resting in the shade of the trees don't even feel in this pleasure. He is really sleeping like a baby or maybe a little bear cub. This kind of people is normally called lazy, but I would prefer to redefine them as huge wooden blocks.   :D

The girl in the second photo might be touchy and I guess someone has hurt her. People actually try to pay more attention to sensitive ones while talking   when they talk  (this makes it clear to whom you refer to).

The woman looks like a little naughty girl who cries and acts, like in this photo, when you don't give them the things they want, for instance toys or junk food.   In fact, she might be so busy and tired that she doesn't even know what else to do right now.  So, I would say: "come on! Shake it up, man, to the age and state of life!"   :D

You have written very interestingly, from dreams (so it seems) to the hard realities of daily life.   I have made some small improvements.   Lastly, I would have said: 'get a grip'.  I think you know what this means.   Good luck!    

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what else to be done right now.    This is your original sentence.

There are 2 possibilities:

-  what else is to be done right now.  I have never ever heard sentences constructed like this, without IS.   Maybe you don't hear the S, because in SPOKEN English people would say: "what's to be done" and they might not pronounce the S clearly.  It has to do with good or bad diction. 

-  What do do right now.  

The difference, I would say, is that the first one, emphasises one's duty or obbligation a little bit more.   What is to be done = what must be done.   What should she do next?  What is expected of her next? 

I'll try and give you an example.   You are at work and the entire network crashes.  You are at your wits end: what is to be done next?   You call the IT specialists to get the network up and running again.

You come home and you are still stressed:  you don't know what to do next:   take a shower to help you relax;  go to the gym, play a game of tennis, watch TV, .....

This is open to interpretation and others might disagree with me.  This is especially the case when there is a very subtle difference;  sometimes people "don't GET" that difference.   This is to the best of my knowledge.  I hope it is helpful.

No, I shall never tell you to rewrite something...  :D  Your English is very good.  I realised that you were a bit facetious about  the first one ...   for the subtle meanings of this word  ;),    look towards the bottom of this page   http://www.thefreedictionary.com/facetious.     Have fun!

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I understand perfectly!   İyi hafta sonları. 

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Hey, long time no see =)

This is an awesome correction, I agree with it completely. The only note is for "get a grip". NOOO!! This is not "grippe" !! ;p

"Get a grip (on reality)" (mental) "Do you have a good grip?" (physical) .

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Hullo! What a nice pleasure. Even donkeys resting in the shade of trees don't feel this kind of pleasure. He is really sleeping like a baby or maybe a little bear cub. These kind of people are normally called lazy, but I would prefer to redefine them as huge wood blocks.

The girl in the second photo might be touchy and I guess someone has hurt her. People actually try to pay more attention to sensitive ones while they're talking. The woman looks like a little naughty girl who cries and acts like in this photo when you don't give her the things she wants, for instance toys or junk food. In fact she might be so busy and tired, that she doesn't even know what else needs to be done right now. So, I would say '' Come on! shake it up, man. Act your age!"

 

Great!