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The Dead Files: New Season Premieres Mar. 8

"The Dead Files" returns for a fourth season of all-new compelling investigations, featuring the extraordinary paranormal investigative duo Steve DiSchiavi and Amy Allan. DiSchiavi, a retired NYPD Homicide Detective, and Allan, a medium, combine their unique skills to solve unexplained paranormal phenomena in haunted locations across the U.S. Here, check out some of the series' most terrifying and unforgettable moments, along with a sneak peek of the season four premiere, airing on Friday, March 8 at 10pm ET/PT.
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As usual I would like to use my imagination and describe short, something unexpected and danger. The sun was raising itself over the treetops . The smile faded quickly from my startled face. For a brief second, I thought the light caught someone lurking behind one of the trees. This seemed to has appeared from out of nowhere. This is a craziest idea ever , I told myself as I searched the darkens places where the trees grew. The air was still and damp. Suddenly , someone crept up from behind and grabbed my shoulder….

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As usual I would like to use my imagination and describe short, something unexpected and dangerous. The sun was raising itself over the treetops . The smile faded quickly from my startled face. For a brief second, I thought the light caught someone lurking behind one of the trees. This It seemed to has appeared from out of nowhere. "This is a the craziest idea ever" , I told myself as I searched the darkens places where the trees grew. The air was still and damp. Suddenly , someone crept up from behind and grabbed my shoulder….

Excellent. Just a couple of notes:
"This man seems to have some problems" or "My brother seems to be unable to call me back"
"The craziest idea ever" isn't exactly the kind of phrase you use in a written text, you may use it in a conversation, but its register isn't formal.
If you get upright then you rise, if you make something rise then you raise:
The sun rises.
My sister has raised two children. This advertisement raises false expectations.

Very good job, it is arguable whether you need to be here.

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As usual I would like to use my imagination and describe short, something unexpected and dangerous. The sun was rising itself over the treetops . The smile faded quickly from my startled face. For a brief second, I thought the light caught someone lurking behind one of the trees. They seemed to have appeared from out of nowhere. 'This is the craziest idea ever' I told myself as I searched the darkens places where the trees grew. The air was still and damp. Suddenly , someone crept up from behind and grabbed my shoulder….

In order to hopefully add something useful I thought I'd rewrite it as I would say it - 

As usual I would like to use my imagination and tell a short story, something unexpected and dangerous. The sun was rising over the treetops. Startled, the smile faded quickly from my face. For a brief moment I thought the light had caught someone lurking behind one of the trees. They seemed to have appeared out of nowhere. 'This is crazy' I told myself as I searched the darkness that surrounded the trees. The air was still and damp. Suddenly, someone who had crept up behind me grabbed my shoulder...

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As usual I would like to use my imagination and describe briefly, something unexpected and dangerous.

As the sun was rising _ over the treetops, the smile quickly faded from my startled face because for a brief second, I thought the light caught someone lurking behind one of the trees. They seemed to have appeared from out of nowhere. This is just so crazy, I told myself as I searched the dimly lit_ woods. The air was still and damp. Suddenly, someone crept up from behind and grabbed my shoulder….

 

Excellent and interesting as usual, just a few small errors.

I have said a dimly lit woods, as the sun was rising, so there would be some light, and the places where trees grow, is usually called a wood or forest

'Raising itself', may be applied to someone or something that was making a real physical gesture, like a bear, raising itself up, or a child raising himself to his full height.

Very good :))

 

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Thank you very much :-)