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marta666

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I love everything what makes me curious or interested and definitely the Stonehenge is one of these causes. In fact, we know almost nothing about the goal of create this place. Speculation on the reason it was built range from human sacrifice to astronomy.
I’m trying and trying to come up something original and interesting but my mind is still blank. I think it is because of the Stonehenge which is itself really interesting.
However, a couple of light years ago, there was a totally other civilization in the world. Ever since losing them hope through a terrible wars and greed, they have always felt very lonely and confused. These thoughts and feelings were forcing them to acting. Although everything seemed so hopeless and so tough, they knew, that being happy again was within they reach. Many years had already gone by. Every day, every morning they headed to the huge temple and was praying .

dave43ish

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I love everything what that makes me curious or interested and definitely the Stonehenge is one of these causes. In fact, we know almost nothing about the goal of create this place. Speculation on the reason it was built ranges from human sacrifice to astronomy. I’m trying and trying to come up something original and interesting but my mind is still blank. I think it is because of the Stonehenge which is itself really interesting. However, a couple of light years ago, there was a totally other civilization in the world. Ever since losing them hope through a terrible wars and greed, they have always felt very lonely and confused. These thoughts and feelings were forcing forced  them to acting. Although everything seemed so hopeless and so tough, they knew, that being happy again was within they their reach. Many years had already gone by. Every day, every morning they headed to the huge temple and was praying prayed .

 

I understand everything you want to say. The corrections are for perfect written English only

 

Excellent :)

marta666

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Thank you Dave :-). Nice to see you again after Easter.

paul lundy

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I love everything that makes me curious or interested and definitely the Stonehenge is one of these causes places which interests me. In fact, we know almost nothing about [ why this historical monument was built in the first place ] the goal reason this place was built of create this place. Speculation on the reason why it was built ranges from human sacrifice to astronomy. I’m trying and trying [I'm making a determined effort ] to come up with something original and interesting but my mind is still blank [ has gone blank ]. I think it is because of the Stonehenge which is itself really interesting. However, a couple of light years ago, there was a totally another civilization in the world. Ever since they lost losing them hope through a terrible wars and greed, they have always felt very lonely and confused. These thoughts and feelings were forcing forced them to acting [ or take action ]. Although everything seemed so hopeless and so tough, they knew, that being happy again was within their reach. Many years had already gone by. Every day, every morning they headed to the huge temple and was praying prayed .

A very difficult topic to write about. A good effort!

marta666

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Thank you Paul.  Sometimes or rather often these tenses in English language make me embarrased :-)

paul lundy

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Don't worry believe me I have the same problem with the different tenses when I'm trying to write the exercises in French.Keep working hard as I know you do. Have a good evening. Paul