For sale. To rent.

Imagine that you want to sell your flat. Write an estate agency advert.


italoman

italoman

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I live in a bright house with some rooms. Al rooms are furnisht spacious and cosy. It's not central and it hasn't good transport connections but you live very peaceful. The layout is optimally siutable for a family with children. You can come and see the flat. If you have signed the contract i will you hand over the keys.

chestersbooks

chestersbooks

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It is a flat, not a house.
*All rooms are furnished, spacious and cosy.

basya12

basya12

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I live in a bright house with several  rooms. All rooms are furnished, spacious and cosy.The district is not central and it hasn't good transport connections but you live very peacefully. The layout is optimally siutable for a family with children. You can come and see the flat. If you  sign the contract i will hand over the keys to you.

 

Steve222

Steve222

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I live in a bright house with several rooms. All rooms are furnished, spacious and cozy. It's not in the busy central city and it doesn't have many transport connections, but you live very peacefully. The layout is optimally suitable for a family with children. You can come and see the flat. If you have signed the contract I will you hand over the keys.

Very good, but I don't know what you mean by "bright house". Does it mean "bright coloured house" or "clean house" or "light coloured house" or "vividly striking house" or something else?

italoman

italoman

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Thanks a lot, I mean we have big windows and many light in all the rooms.

Fifthmonth

Fifthmonth (44)

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I live in a bright house with many rooms. All rooms are furnished spacious and cozy. It's not in the city centre and it doesn't have good transport connections, but you live very peacefully. The layout is optimally suitable for a family with children. You can come and see the flat. If you have signed the contract I will you hand over the keys.

I live in a bright  ? house? with some  several rooms. All rooms are furnisht   furnished. It is spacious and cosy. It's not central and it hasn't good transport connections but you  will enjoy being able to live very peaceful. The layout is optimally siutable for a family with children. You can come and see the flat. If you have signed the contract i will you hand over the keys.

Bright? Maybe light?

Apartment - not house

Several rather than some

furnished not furnisht. You were right with cosy. It is not spelled with a z.

This is an advert, so try to maximise positives for impact, rather than drawing on what is lacking.

What you wrote was generally OK though, and you are doing really well with English.

I have written you a "sale advert" using your words and a few alterations for you to consider. Just some ideas.  Best wishes, Arumea

 

FOR SALE - This spacious, yet cosy, furnished apartment has plenty of natural light. There are several rooms, optimally designed for a family with children. Located away from the town centre and noise of public transport, you will enjoy the peace and tranquility of the environment. Early viewing by appointment is recommended. The keys will be available on completion of the contract.

italoman

italoman

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Wow, that's what I wanted to say. Thanks.