At the dentist

How often do you go to the dentist? Do you mind going?


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I go a few times a year to the dentist. I like to hear from my dentist that my teeth are fine. I do not mind going to the dentist because it's good for my body and my soul. I am calm and I try to bear everything. When I am sitting on a dental chair then I think about daydreaming... I'm in the prime of life. The whole life ahead of me so I just must bear my visit. :) It's over? Super ... I could go on singing in the rain bravely enduring my pain. Thank you .... To see you soon again... Time to feed my brain.

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I go a few times a year to the dentist or I go to the dentist a few times a year.

I like to hear from my dentist that my teeth are fine. I do not mind going to the dentist because it's good for my body and my soul. I am calm, and I try to bear everything with equanimity. When I am sitting in a dental chair, then I think about daydreaming (I daydream)... I'm in the prime of (my) life. My whole life is ahead of me, so I must just  bear (my visit) it. (tolerate the procedure) :) It's over? (Is it over?) Super ... I could go on singing bravely  in the rain to  endure my pain. Thank you .... See you soon again... (It's) time to feed my brain.

Use a ladle - it is more efficient. I gave you some suggestions about a better word order and fix up some idioms. Next time a dentist drills into me, I will think of singing in the rain.

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Only music and songs can save us :)))  Thanks for your remarks and corrections :)
 

"A day without drill is like a day without sunshine".

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A day without a drill (double meaning= exercise, cwiczenie, or a dentist drill, swider) is like a day without pain.:) 

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Thank you :))

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I go a few times a year to the dentist (I go to the dentist a few times a year). I like to hear from my dentist that my teeth are fine.

I do not mind going to the dentist because it's good for my body and my soul. (good for my wellbeing)

I am calm and I try to bear (tolerate, put up, endure) everything.

When I am sitting in a dental chair then I think about begin daydreaming... I'm in the prime of my life (I'm in my prime).

My The whole life ahead of me so I just must just bear (tolerate, put up, endure) my visit. :)

It's Is it over? Super ... I could go on singing in the rain bravely enduring my pain. Thank you ....

To See you again soon again... It's time to feed my brain.

Fabulous job as always, I've always enjoyed my visit to the dentist amazingly! You can see the suggestions in blue and the corrections in red. *****

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Thank you for clear and understable correction.  Drills are particularly attractive. :-)))

Have a nice day :)

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The correction from Jacob is very good.

Whilst zycie is the life - it is possessive to you so it changes to 'my life'

The rest of the corrections simply go beyond inadequate Polish/English translation. Sometimes words or phrases simply do not make sense to a native Polish/English person when translated. That is where we all help each other. Then we simply have to remember and practise :)

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Thank you for your comment, Dave. :) We need each other. :-))

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I have been quiet , BUT I have still been reading and loving what you write :o)

Keep smiling , and thank you for making me and others smile too with what you say ;o)

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I go a few times a year to the dentist. I like to hear from my dentist that my teeth are fine. I do not mind going to the dentist because it's good for my body and my soul. I am calm and I try to bear everything. When I am sitting in a dental chair then I think about I tend to start daydreaming... I'm in the prime of life. The My whole life ahead of me so I just must have to bear [ or endure any pain ] during my visit. :) It's over? Super ... I could go on singing in the rain bravely enduring my pain. Thank you .... To see you soon again... Time to feed my brain.

Well done!